ode to what should have never been

[heads_bang]

Pairing: gd/top
Rating: nc-17
Summary: A look at how it all started, to what it is now. Non-au.
1,735 words~

Comments

[ajuway]

drooling~~~~

[heads_bang]

haha, /wipes
glad you liked it~

[elisechoi]

Dies....loves it

[heads_bang]

wahhh, im glad you liked it :)
thanks for reading and commenting~

[xouterxfringex]

“Hyung… I like you.”

“Okay.”

It's so simple but sweet, my favorite part. It's like the one word response is saying a lot more than just 'okay' and they can both feel it by the way they kiss afterwards. And throughout the fic it's obvious to see how much Seunghyun adores Jiyong.

Also, smut was hot. Dirty talk is my fav kink.

[heads_bang]

awww, i really liked ur comment, b/c yes it's true... seunghyun really adores jiyong in here (/hopes it's that way too in rl)
but yeah, i've always felt like less is more when dealing with emotions, esp love~

ahahaa....the smut was my starting point so i feel like its more detailed than the other parts. and yes i have a penchant for dirty talk as well... >:D

[atenais_pala]

Oh, this is so beautiful, so them.

I don't know what to say, I loved it.
Thank you!

[heads_bang]

wah, thank you ;~;

I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried the characterization would be off, but I feel a little better about it after reading ur comment.
thanks so much for reading and commenting~ :)

[lovelyable]

nori! okay there are elements to this fic that i smiled at - like, sharing the cigarette without even one of them having to ask the other (:3)! the entire bed in the dark scene! those are always my favorite, and cheeky-sleepy gd is great.

i think some details you included were nice (i keep wanting to say "nuggets" or "tidbits" but omg i'm not 45 and british and bearded) insights into their characters that made them unique to this fic, like top needing prescription sleeping pills to sleep.

i'm not sure if you wanted concrit on any fics you didnt send me, but if you want it for this one (or others) just let me know n__n

overall, i think you're a good writer with lots of potential and i'm really glad you're writing for gtop and i hope you write more wonderful things :)!

[heads_bang]

haha thanks for the comment, i loved it. and personally i like the word "tidbits" too, it's just too cute and all fancy sounding~ ^^
and i'm up for any concrit you wanna offer~ already sent you an email about that...

thanks again, i definitely wanna write a lot more now that im on break, hope you'll help me out too~ :)