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Team Epilogue: 22. I think I saw a Pensieve like this once...

May 05, 2009 14:28

Title: History
Team: Epilogue
Author: emerald_dragon8
Prompt: 22. I think I saw a Pensieve like this once...
Wordcount: 17 000
Rating: R
Warnings: Infidelity, some swearing, a slightly porny scene, bad grammar in Harry's text messages (hopefully good grammar elsewhere!)
Summary: "Take from the altars of the past the fire, not the ashes" - Jean Jaures. When a ( Read more... )

r, fic, prompt: 22. i saw a pensieve like this, team epilogue, round ii

Comments 39

curia_regis May 5 2009, 12:46:48 UTC

I love your use of quotes in this! And you managed to integrate your prompt brilliantly into the fic. ♥ I really do love this and I think I've already told you how much the first attacks were amusing.

GO TEAM EPILOGUE!

emerald_dragon8 May 6 2009, 00:24:20 UTC

Thank you darling!!! hehe, yeah you have. BUT I ALWAYS LIKE HEARING IT AGAIN. ♥

WHOO! WE ROCK!

arobynsung May 5 2009, 15:43:18 UTC

Wow, this was just...wow.
Wonderful work!

emerald_dragon8 May 6 2009, 00:20:21 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed it. :)

franalan May 5 2009, 16:39:33 UTC

That was just beautiful, and so sad at the end. I loved it ♥

emerald_dragon8 May 6 2009, 00:20:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm such a sucker for a sad ending. I love them, I don't know why. :) So glad you enjoyed it!

smirking_muse May 5 2009, 19:20:11 UTC

This was really wonderful. I love that the main pretense of the story was the mystery at the Ministry, and I must say, it was quite a mystery for me up until the very end. I had my suspicions, but it wasn’t entirely clear. You’ve set up the story in a very interesting way- through memories, flashbacks and papers- it was really fascinating. I felt badly for their children that they had to discover it in such a way, but they both seemed okay with it ( ... )

emerald_dragon8 May 6 2009, 00:32:38 UTC

Wow, I kind of don't know how to respond to this, it's such a lovely and well thought out review! :) First of all, I'm really glad that the ending was a mystery to you, because I mainly write angst/romance/drama stuff, which doesn't have a really big non-romantic plot, so I was really nervous when I began writing this, because I thought "oh wow, I'm actually going to have to have a plot ( ... )

misscake May 5 2009, 19:59:00 UTC

Oh, Harry!

This was really well done. I loved the plot and they way that each bit was revealed. Very seamless.

emerald_dragon8 May 6 2009, 00:21:35 UTC

Thank you! One of the things I was really worried about when I set out to write it was the flow, so I'm glad it worked for you!