Of Truth and Illusion - Team Epilogue

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Title: Of Truth and Illusion
Team: Epilogue
Author: ennyousai
Prompt: The Moon
Wordcount: ~12250
Rating: PG-13 at the most
Warnings: Tentative infidelity.
Summary: The disappearance of Albus Severus Potter was surely orchestrated by Harry Potter's archrival Draco Malfoy. But not everything is as it appears...
Author's Note: Information on the Moon card can

Comments

[pionie]

I enjoyed this, there were some lovely dreamy touches of description, very suited to the Moon. My favourite Moon fic :)

[outofthisplace]

I liked reading this, and it was well-done and a very well-explored use of the prompt, but... I don't know, it kind of felt predictable, the way you illustrated their relationship. You know, Harry thinks his life is good, realizes it needs more, Draco appears, Ginny is easy and forgiving, the foe fairly easily vanquished. It just seemed... too easy, maybe. It was very well done, though, and high marks on Prompt use!

[romaine24]

What a nice mystery story. I really enjoyed the gypsy trip and that they did it by train. The mirror from Muggle gypses being a magical item was clever. Wow, Asteria was a bit cold.

[who_la_hoop]

This was very enjoyable. The plot felt a little cliched, perhaps, but you handled it well - it was well written and the characters IC and believable. I liked your Ginny, and your restless Harry - searching, but not sure what he's searching for. The understated ending was lovely - even if a little unrealistic (I think Ginny would have a fit if Harry left her, just like that, and what about their kids?). Still, a pleasant read, thank you!

[marguerite_26]

I liked your tie to The Moon card. The dreams and the mirror and the mystery were very interesting. My favourite part was Harry realizing his own complacency.