Of Truth and Illusion - Team Epilogue

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Title: Of Truth and Illusion
Team: Epilogue
Author: ennyousai
Prompt: The Moon
Wordcount: ~12250
Rating: PG-13 at the most
Warnings: Tentative infidelity.
Summary: The disappearance of Albus Severus Potter was surely orchestrated by Harry Potter's archrival Draco Malfoy. But not everything is as it appears...
Author's Note: Information on the Moon card can

Comments

[absynthedrinker]

That was wonderful! I love a good mystery! Thanks

Bubba

[shoeboxer4life]

I liked the mystery. Would have liked more interaction between our heroes, though.

[snottygrrl]

interesting idea of a shamed branch of the malfoys. there's got to be at least one out there, eh? i've always liked a studied!draco.

[sesheta_66]

I like how you show the slow building of their relationship, without infidelity, though their emotional connection is still growing.

The fact that it is Draco who informs Harry that he's sleepwalking through life is great, and that Harry actually looks at himself in the mirror.

I love a good mystery, and while yes, as someone else pointed out, it all came together quite neatly and easily in the end, I enjoyed it - especially the fact that Harry took it as the opportunity to use his own abilities, his own intelligence to find and rescue Albus, rather than relying on others (Aurors or even Hermione).

Ginny's whole acknowledgement that Harry didn't have the training as an Auror was a real wake-up call, and confirmation of what Draco had said. Well done.

[pervyunitwins]

I enjoyed reading thing because there were so many unique elements about it. For example, the illegitimate Malfoy line, and the mirror and Harry being a Seer. And the ending, I loved the ending.