Comments | hazy_crazy: Cedric/Hermione

hazy_crazy

Cedric/Hermione :: 15 Minute Ficlets

Jan 07, 2006 03:41

I can't believe I actually rose to this challenge... usually I'm no good at writing in a small amount of time because I don't have enough time to collect and distribute my thoughts... but I thought, "what the heck, let's do this!"

And so my first ever Cedric/Hermione is born! =D ( Read more... )

ship: cedric/hermione, fandom: fanfiction

Comments 26

koalathebear January 6 2006, 17:38:44 UTC

Love it! It's really good and I'm not just saying that! Thank you for the dedication! I'm honoured to have such a lovely little piece dedicated to me. :)

The only thing I'd think about (and I know you didn't ask for my thoughts :) Is the 'shone like a thousand moonbeams' description. Maybe consider 'moonlight' instead? 'Beams' might be a bit too intense. :)

Love this line: "After all, Hermione really did enjoy the feeling of Cedric’s lips on hers". :)

hazy_crazy January 6 2006, 17:46:38 UTC

Whoa, that was a quick reply!

Thanks very much for the feedback.

I've thought about what you said... and after all, "moonlight" sounds far more romantic, I think... but nevertheless, perhaps this sounds better: shone like the moonlight??

I really do appreciate your thoughts, though!

=D thanks again.

koalathebear January 6 2006, 17:48:39 UTC

I think: 'shone like the moonlight' works very well :)

The word moonlight is a very nice word to have associated with Cedric. Hee.

No need for thanks, thank you! :)

darksilvermoon January 6 2006, 18:13:08 UTC

love the idea that cedric could be one of the eight deadly sins...hehe love the fic.

hazy_crazy January 7 2006, 01:33:51 UTC

=D Thanks so much for reading! I think that's a great idea ;)

lillyfics January 6 2006, 23:43:01 UTC

That was lovely.
Especially the last line ;)

hazy_crazy January 7 2006, 01:34:20 UTC

Thank you - I'm glad you liked it.
Yes, the last line is my favourite too ;)

hippiez January 7 2006, 05:19:34 UTC

*sigh* Cedric's lips would be the eight deadly sins I couldn't ignore! SERIOUSLY! Anyway, WHy are you hiding?! I don't like it... I LOVE it! *grins*

hazy_crazy January 7 2006, 05:54:33 UTC

LOL I agree! Thanks heaps - I'm so glad you liked loved it ;)

dannydisco January 7 2006, 06:30:29 UTC

ROFL! That was adorable. Even though I'm not fond of Hermione/Cedric, it was cute.

hazy_crazy January 7 2006, 08:13:51 UTC

Lol thanks Nat - I'm glad you liked it even though you don't ship them! =)

dannydisco January 8 2006, 04:33:25 UTC

Oh you're welcome :D
Pfft yeah, cause we all know Cedric/Fleur is better ;) ;)