original writing: Motorcycle Vagabond (5/?)

[havenward]

Title: Motorcycle Vagabond
Rating: PG13 (mild language)
Words: 299
Note: Continues to be non-linear. PLEASE comment and critique. For teithiwr, who prompted me to write something about Dani's family. It's been a while, and I was hoping for something longer this time...

Summary: Some dates she avoids on purpose. Sometimes she's just shy of apathetic.

Comments

[teithiwr]

She doesn't say my mother thinks that living off what my brother left me disrespects his memory.
Okay, this line gave me the shivers. I love finding out these tiny snippets about Dani, and this one line manages to convey so much stuff in so few words. It explains so much. Lovely!

[havenward]

::blushes:: I'm really glad it worked. I was actually afraid it was a little too blunt, a little too left field. But I felt like I also needed to cover how it is Dani has enough money to live like she does as well...

Plus, this helped me iron out some of the stuff for what happened before... :D

♥♥♥

[teithiwr]

needed to cover how it is Dani has enough money to live like she does as well... It works really well with that, because I was beginning to wonder. :D

ps. You awake? Crazy woman! *shakes head*

[havenward]

not for lack of trying, I swear!

[fyrie]

Yay for nicely understated ways of building up background :D That whole thing about her family reveals so much :)

[havenward]

\o/ After spending a week banging my head into a wall, I'm soooo glad this worked! And apparently I can be subtle! I thought I was being all anvil like but... yay!

[thehighwaywoman]

And the layers layer further :D It's so cool finding out each new thing about her. now I want to know about her brother!