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Fic: Jigsaw Falling Into Place (1/1)

May 05, 2009 20:21

Title: Jigsaw Falling Into Place (1/1)
Author: spinawebofsound aka be_found
Pairing(s), Character(s): Mohinder/Sylar (as Nathan). Mentions of Molly, Monica, Micah and Tracy.
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: This is set about 5 months after 03x25 and therefore contains spoilers for the finale. Also kinda angsty and contains character death.
Summary: Something draws ( Read more... )

pairing: mohinder/sylar, fandom: heroes, rating: pg-13, !fic, genre: angst, fic: jigsaw falling into place, other characters: nathan, warning: character death, other characters: monica

Comments 21

nothingtosay May 5 2009, 19:31:16 UTC

What I liked about this especially is how shaky "Nathan's" identity is from the very start. It felt very real- like, how he would feel in that situation. The angst isn't at all gratuitous- Mohinder's dilemma is totally tragic and awful. The last scene is just bloody heartbreaking, and yet you know it couldn't have ended any other way. It's been so long since I enjoyed reading any fic as much as I enjoyed this- and I'm not just saying that, etcetera.

be_found May 5 2009, 19:40:06 UTC

You know how important your opinion is to me so thank you. Like I said earlier I wasn't planning on the ending but it seems that its the only thing Mohinder could do even if it was his Zane. Can't let a monster stay free.

sliding_scale May 5 2009, 20:48:32 UTC

*grabby hands* oh....goodness...

levitatethis May 5 2009, 22:36:19 UTC

What a fascinating approach to this potential turn of events on the show. I really love the uncertainty that colours so much of this, the not knowing that runs as this overall theme and encompasses all the characters.

I love that you have both Nathan and Mohinder feeling unsure. There's this uneasiness, but also this fascination that exists between them and slowly, through actions, conversations, you build up the clues...for both of them.

Somewhere between his own confession of weakness and the inability to stop himself from talking like an imposter- somewhere between the careful way Mohinder had listened to the his breakdown and his sudden outburst of anger... he had become someone else. Forgetting his family had no longer seemed important but fixing this clock, thinking about Mohinder, conjuring up landscapes he was certain he hadn’t driven through before... all of that brought him the calm he had so sorely needed.I love this rejection of the facade and desperate grasp to who he really is ( ... )

be_found May 7 2009, 20:34:05 UTC

Thanks as always for the comment. It was interesting to write Nathan I hadn't really thought about him before for fic so I had to make so he wasn't really himself otherwise I don't think I would've done his character justice.

neshel May 5 2009, 23:31:07 UTC

*wibbles*

Oh my, how beautifully tragic.

Nathan/Sylar's confusion was so well done and Mohinder's reactions were heartbreaking but felt so very real.

LOVE!

be_found May 7 2009, 20:34:49 UTC

Thanks, I do like tragic fic it seems.

mabetini May 5 2009, 23:54:38 UTC

Oh my GOD you did this a million times better than I did!

MY HEART! *WIBBLE* D:

be_found May 7 2009, 20:35:09 UTC

Aww thanks have a hug *hugs*