Saguru + Heiji: I need them, but always nervous writing them. Mostly because I haven't read much Heiji. *sweatdrop*
Saguru being revoltingly OOC: I cannot counter that. I agree wholeheartedly, but have never had the heart to edit it out. Because I'm stupid that way. 8| Sorry.
... You think too much. I made Conan blind on the most random whim. I'm freaked because that's the first time I've deviated from the plot. D'8 This is my first foray into chapterfic writing, you know. I'm so scared.
IDK why not a whiteout for Kaito? IDEK the real difference besides the colours. I need tips on writing torture from you. This is a demand.
LOL I LOVE YOU TOO BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN I UNDERSTAND HOW A FIC BY AN EX-14-YR OLD N00B THIS MASSIVE COLLECTION OF TRYHARD-NESS MAKES PEOPLE LIKE IT
( ... )
If you want more Heiji chapters, I can find them for you.
It's funny, and not very noticeable on the first read-through, but... yeah... idk.
Oh, okay. LET ME NOT COMPLEMENT YOUR PLOT EVER AGAIN, OKAY?
I just thought blackout instead, because whenever I manage to stand up too fast it's usually a blackout, like tunnel vision that condenses in on itself. But the idea "and he vaguely felt his left hand scraping lightly against the cold stone wall as he went down" works well there, just in my experience, because that's what it feels like when you go down like that.
BECAUSE I ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ MANY THINGS BY YOU AND THIS IS GOODFIC NOW STOP MAKING ME PRAISE YOU DAGNABBIT.
Yeah, "elsewhere" struck me in the same way, perhaps if you stuck it near the end of the Conan+Kaito section, before May says "now stand" but after she collar-shocks them?
I like reading things like this more than flowery stuff, because it's easier to focus on characterization rather than pretty flowery details.
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Saguru being revoltingly OOC: I cannot counter that. I agree wholeheartedly, but have never had the heart to edit it out. Because I'm stupid that way. 8| Sorry.
... You think too much. I made Conan blind on the most random whim. I'm freaked because that's the first time I've deviated from the plot. D'8 This is my first foray into chapterfic writing, you know. I'm so scared.
IDK why not a whiteout for Kaito? IDEK the real difference besides the colours. I need tips on writing torture from you. This is a demand.
LOL I LOVE YOU TOO BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN I UNDERSTAND HOW A FIC BY AN EX-14-YR OLD N00B THIS MASSIVE COLLECTION OF TRYHARD-NESS MAKES PEOPLE LIKE IT ( ... )
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It's funny, and not very noticeable on the first read-through, but... yeah... idk.
Oh, okay. LET ME NOT COMPLEMENT YOUR PLOT EVER AGAIN, OKAY?
I just thought blackout instead, because whenever I manage to stand up too fast it's usually a blackout, like tunnel vision that condenses in on itself. But the idea "and he vaguely felt his left hand scraping lightly against the cold stone wall as he went down" works well there, just in my experience, because that's what it feels like when you go down like that.
BECAUSE I ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ MANY THINGS BY YOU AND THIS IS GOODFIC NOW STOP MAKING ME PRAISE YOU DAGNABBIT.
Yeah, "elsewhere" struck me in the same way, perhaps if you stuck it near the end of the Conan+Kaito section, before May says "now stand" but after she collar-shocks them?
I like reading things like this more than flowery stuff, because it's easier to focus on characterization rather than pretty flowery details.
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Yes, IDK either. Me and my whims.
IT'S "COMPLIMENT" OKAY?
Should I also be worrying about your health? Black outs? XD
NEVAH.
Heh, that bit I was saving for the end because of shock value and more cliffhanger-ness. Because I'm a plain evil moron.
Not that girly, eh? Same. I can barely concentrate when reading flowery writing. It's so distracting that it negates everything else.
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