Comments | haruko_tegoshi: Dolls (Fanfic) ~Chapter 2~

haruko_tegoshi

Dolls (Fanfic) ~Chapter 2~

Dec 10, 2012 20:04

Title: Dolls

Author: haruko_tegoshi

Rating: PG

Pairing: KoyaShige

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Comments 8

sky_fish7 December 10 2012, 22:37:39 UTC

Oho =) Seems to get interesting! How will this go on? I'm really curious ^^ I love to see them with those characters btw, really fits them =)
Just noticed that you switched sometimes to the "I" while writing from Kei-chan's point of view... of did I misunderstand?

haruko_tegoshi December 11 2012, 11:54:43 UTC

Thanks for the comment and yep I sometimes switch to 'I' sorry if it confuses you.

haruko_tegoshi December 11 2012, 12:10:50 UTC

oh yeah have you also read the prologue?

sky_fish7 December 12 2012, 14:02:59 UTC

Yeah, I read the prologue back then when you posted it... Seems like I forgot to post a comment, I'm sorry XD the prologue was very interesting so I wonder why I missed chapter 1 when you posted it.

haruka21 December 16 2012, 02:47:57 UTC

I enjoyed this chapter too and I can't wait for the next one. I'm sorry I didn't reply to your reply but this month has been extra busy. I'm glad my comments didn't bother you ^^. About the height though. Shige is only about an inch shorter than Koyama but he describes Koyama in his mind as a head taller which would make him about 6 to 7 inches taller than Shige.

haruko_tegoshi December 17 2012, 06:43:28 UTC

Oh...Sorry about the height I think I was comparing my height to Koyama that's why I wrote that. Sorry for confusing you ^_^

himitsu_17 December 25 2012, 23:20:15 UTC

It's cute :)
Can't wait to read more because it's sound really promising :)

Thanks for writing and sharing!!

ext_754596 December 28 2012, 16:06:44 UTC

I become more and more interested in this fic. I look forward to the next chapter :D Thank you so much!