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[Crit]
This post is for crit and such. Please be nice about it because bashing someone is mean.
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Voice
Dad?
[Not this again. You can hear a slight quiver in her voice. This is the second fake father in a year. She's not used to it anymore ( Read more... ) -
Something in the water
[Haruhi is currently sitting in one of the areas of the garden, staring into the reflecting pool. There's something down there, there was at least. She could swear she remembers there was a small kingdom down there once, but she's not certain if she can still see it or not ( Read more... ) -
Zero gravity
[There is a visual of Haruhi. She is floating with her book-sack, several books that she normally carries and the tattered copy of Alice and Wonderland that she and one of the previous Tamakis had found. It's heavily tattered now and she seems to have been rewriting notes from it into a notebook when the gravity stopped working. There's also a ( Read more... ) -
Nurse anyone?
[Haruhi is sitting at a desk doing what one has to assume is some sort of clerical work. She's wearing what looks like the traditional white nurse outfit that has been out of fashion since the 1960's at the latest.
She holds up what looks like a rather old fashioned script.]
Doctor Yujinn needs this much lithium? That seems a bit extreme .... [ ( Read more... ) -
[Audio]
[There's the sound of clattering as the device falls to the ground and a loud click as the thunder storm grows in intensity outside.] -
(Untitled)
[It was a dark and stormy night. No, really, it was. It's raining so hard that it sounds more like someone is throwing baseballs outside and the lightning is coming in rapid sucession, followed by thunder as loud as can be. Haruhi has been spending the time since the storm started huddled under a blanket (the only thing to hide under in the room ( Read more... ) -
(Untitled)
[Everyone gets a wonderful shot of Shen's nose. He managed to turn on the comm and now it's recording as Haru is looking around her bedroom. There's the button doll sitting on her bed, and there is the picture of her father sitting on her bedside table. There's a small shrine set up to her mother with incense burning against one wall and the ( Read more... ) -
Some information
The room is back. Walter's room, um, room 302 is now a normal room. I'm confused. If Walter's room changed back to a normal room a little over a year after he left then does that mean Destiny Island will disappear too? It's really weird that the mansion was adding in things before but is taking them away ( Read more... ) -
Introspective. Most of it you really don't need
[Haruhi is in the hospital library, which isn't the library anymore so much as the hospital billing department. She frowns as she looks over the shelves of paperwork. This wasn't what she was used to. Usually the library was mostly left alone. Shen whines next to her, wanting some wet food, but there isn't any wet food to give him. He'll have ( Read more... )