Force-feeding

[haru_kurofai]

Time for some KuroFai fanfic lol
This plot has been plaguing me for days!! <333
Can't believe I wrote this (around 2200 words) in 2 hours XDDD
Wish I wrote my dissertation with half that speed.... m(_ _)m

Title: Force-feeding
Author: haru_kurofai
Pairings: Kurogane x Fai
Warnings: Angtsy KuroFai smex in Infinity
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Spoilers for

Comments

[insanefriends]

I 100% did not have any inkling english is not your native language until I read the A/N. And I am wow'd. *claps* excellent job!

[haru_kurofai]

>/////< really?
I'm so glad you liked it!
Thank you~~ <33 *hugs*

[insanefriends]

*hugs back* really! Your English is great!

[haru_kurofai]

Thanks <3333333 *hugs*
LOL!! Hard Gay!!!! FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO XDDDDDD

[bittenpencil]

awweeee
the last bit is sooooo sweett ><
i luv ittt :)

[haru_kurofai]

I really liked the last bit too~
Love the bittersweetness <33
I can actually imagine Kuro-sama doing that >///<
Glad you liked it =3

[imladra]

I really liked how Kurogane got Fay to feed. Clever, clever ninja. And hand-holding during sex...I love that! It's just so sweet. ^_^

[haru_kurofai]

>//////////< Thank you
Imladra-sama, I'm so honoured to see you like it >/////

[ldydragon7]

This was really good, I enjoyed it. I am always amazed by non-English speakers who can write in English.

One note: "It was the signal for Fai to slicker Kurogane’s fingers in preparation."

I understood what you were trying to say, but 'slicker' doesn't actually work in that context (because English rules of grammar are insane). Slicker would only work if you were saying 'this is slick but that is slicker (more slick)' For what you are doing here perhaps moisten (to make moist) would work better. Just my two cents, please ignore if this is not helpful to you.

But anyway, very good fic and I loved Kuro's soft side and Fai wanting him but also needing to push him away because he loves him.

[haru_kurofai]

Actually I was having trouble trying to get the right word for it /w\
I think moisten would have been the better word to use <33 Thanks for your suggestion!
I'm glad you liked it <333

[kurofai_fangirl]

That was so amazing. I love how the story progressed. Fai was absolutely perfect. I love Kurogane's characterization.*Steals Kurogane and scurries away*Thank you for sharing this wonderful pic!*loves!!*

[haru_kurofai]

////// thank you!! <3 *hugs*
I'm so glad you liked it!
I was really worried about them being OOC..
Everyone wants their own Kurorin XDDDD *shot*

[kurofai_fangirl]

Indeed indeed!<3