[Fic] Painting the Sky

Sep 24, 2009 11:09

...okay yeah, should be studying for History *and she is YAY MULTITASKING...and curse you TVTropes* but very much thank you to roommate's friend for saying 'Oh I like your background' thus making me look at it and think 'Gee, why do I like it so much?' Thus this little idea sprung up...

Character's: Lav, Kanda, Allen, Lenalee, Miranda, Bookman, ( Read more... )

lenalee, miranda, klaud, allen, lavi, kanda, etc, d. gray man

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ashoakandthorn September 24 2009, 17:26:39 UTC
This is really pretty. Details later...

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harmony283 September 24 2009, 18:47:21 UTC
glad you think so ^^ Okay~ *is uploading it on FF, actually* I wanted to put it as part of the WKS series...but it really doesn't fit..so...

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ashoakandthorn September 24 2009, 19:06:25 UTC
Timeline incompatabilities! Well, the way it's written now, yes.

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harmony283 September 24 2009, 19:12:11 UTC
well I never outright said any of the drabbles in WKS go in order. I just said that the first four happen to go together XD *could probably get away with it but* it's very not humorous...and again, yeah the style it's written in *nod*

and damn my back hurts *hopes the heating pad works*

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tinyweaver September 25 2009, 19:32:46 UTC
[OOC: Just because I'm much too lazy to log out and back into my other account. Out of character, I will say that this was really good. It's intense and really deep. And I DO love how you always seem to write when you see a picture. XD Also, koodles to you if you knew who this was without reading my comment~ Now back to being back in character of a 7-year old. Ffff.]

Hmm. Everyone seems so sad. Why are they sad? Did something bad happen? [Oh yes, childhood innocence.]

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harmony283 September 25 2009, 20:57:12 UTC
[XD *just laughs here* of course I know it's you, Rebe! The icon explains it all~ *and she remembers the name, oh yes* I'm glad you like it! And...actually, well, I mean...I've been staring at this background for MONTHS...and just now I tried to figure out why I liked it. So yeah *laugh*]

Hum, well, you see...things are sad because of a war, do you know what a war is? It's when people fight each other. Except they didn't fight people. They fought sadness. Sadness so that others could be sad, but not harmed by it, and now that the war against sadness is over, they are sad themselves. [oh yes explanation mode~]

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danybel September 26 2009, 17:08:37 UTC
oh my god this is beautiful........... it may my eyes water.
I loved it, I can't describe how amazingly beautiful it is.

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harmony283 September 27 2009, 03:09:43 UTC
It did for me too (after I uploaded it on FF.net and re-read it) I actually thought it had a bit of a happy note to it at the end when I was first writing it, but that might just be me...

But thank you for reading it~ and I'm glad you think so! (sometimes things are supposed to be, I guess, indescribable. *has no idea what the heck she was thinking while writing this anyway*)

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danybel September 28 2009, 03:26:22 UTC
I think the happy note is there, that's what made me cry xDD

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harmony283 September 29 2009, 04:55:46 UTC
yeah probably. I mean I had one person (on FF, I think?) point out that they all seemed so close to insanity...but...well you can take that 2 ways.

1-since you aren't sane, things in the sane world don't bother you in the world (happy)

2-since you aren't sane, you realize more what the 'sane' things mean (sad)

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symbolism_egg October 5 2009, 06:41:26 UTC
I liked the surreal atmosphere of this. Lavi's desperation to paint the sky really comes across, and the character interaction is sweet.

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harmony283 October 5 2009, 13:11:52 UTC
Eheh, glad you liked it ^^ I wanted this to be both sweet and sad too...and generally people think I did that well so...*nod*

(this piece still makes me tear-up when I read it XD)

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hakasha October 20 2009, 00:31:03 UTC
and because I loved this one so much, I'll be commenting again here on LJ.

it's such a pretty, poetic story. T.T *grabs a tissue and blows nose* I could make a list of LOVEs again here, this time with 1000x the length, and it still wouldn't be enough to express how much I love this story. *sniff*

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harmony283 October 20 2009, 01:03:38 UTC
Ahah and I thank you for it again~! *hugs*

*takes tissues and dabs her eyes as well* yeah...seriously. I think I'm just a crybaby but I always have a penchant for re-reading a fanfic when someone comments on it, anddd...it still makes me cry T^T But thank you yet again >.< *hugs*

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