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symbolism_egg February 2 2010, 01:42:37 UTC
I really liked the atmosphere in this. Poor losing Noahs...

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harmony283 February 2 2010, 02:29:38 UTC
I'm glad you do ^^ that's one of the main reasons why I uploaded it XD *liked what she did with it* but yeah the Noahs are losing in this >.< and thank you for the comment~~

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meggle_star February 2 2010, 08:17:42 UTC
First and foremost--

Favorite line: "I mean what I say I mean." tacka-tacka --footsteps, sunday school shoes, probably been bloodied before, "We're probably going to lose."

The atmosphere. Is great. In this. o_o

I mean.. it's a heavy atmosphere, but it fits. Because... well, the Noah are kind of losing. Which is another interesting thing, which-- makes me wonder how far they are in the war. -blinks-

Also-- I kinda.. as a reader, saw the Exorcists as the antagonists, maybe? I mean.. because I was siding with Lulu being despondent about her dead 'siblings', instead of going "WOO" because the Black Order was actually kicking some rear.

I kinda.. felt bad for the bad Noah. Does that make me a sympathizer or something? -laughs- Because.. it was kinda sad how they were described, so something in my brain went "Awww D<" instead of "YAY", if that makes any sense at all ( ... )

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meggle_star February 2 2010, 08:19:27 UTC
NOUUUUU. D':
Evil HTML strikes again!

-lightning strikes, snifflesob-

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