J-Joker
Fandom: D. Gray Man
Pairing: Allen x Lavi
Summary: Why so…british? -YGTAS REFERENCE- *shot*
A/N: Dual fill. One for the DGM kink meme (
pt 2, last page) and one obviously for the
ABC fic meme I have going on, which also…this fill takes place in the RP me and Sam are doing right now…so it’s for 3 people? Also yes, you're allowed to be
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*squeaks*
OhmygodmyfaceissorednowandIamblushinglikemadgaaaaah-
Oh. My. God.
You need to write more Allen/Lavi. NOW. OH GOD THE ENDING I WANT MOOOOOOORE.
*tiny voice* please?
*attempts to regain coherency* Right. So. The French looks mad hot, I cannot even really guess what Allen is saying since the extent of sexy French I know is "Do you want to sleep with me?" from the song 'Lady Marmalade'. But oh dear lord *swallows* The hammer. THE HAMMER. I don't blame the crowd at all for their lack of decency.
Oh dear and I can just imagine Lavi's eyes glued to Allen's movements the whole time and going "oh shit oh shit I am so screwed". Here's to hoping he is screwed in the end, mmmmmmrf.
In other words, thank you. I don't even quite care that this is "shared" between three people because I'm possessive like that, mwahaha, and I consider it my request. MINE. MY PRECIOUSSSSS~ Okay no but, seriously, this is awesome and fantastic and hot and I totally did not expect you using the prompt like that, which is doubly great, and I ( ... )
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*fans you* um, um, well...Allen x Lavi is highly amusing? XD Though as I said in the summary, it's my girlfriend's fault (sent this to her for editing) that it ended that way. I may or may not write a sequel XD *depends on if she gets inspiration* if not, again a scene kinda-like-this plays out in the RP so chances are you WILL be seeing it again. Not sure if that equates to anytime soon BUT you will see something like it again.
Well the first French phrase is 'Would you like to dance' (there are like 4 ways to say this, the one Allen uses is meant to be flirtatious)
The second one is "I have a present/gift for you~" ^^
The Hammer was thanks to the OP on the kink meme XD (well--she wanted it in-canon with Lavi's hammer. I changed it up to a PRESENT that Lavi gave Allen--cuz it's just like him to give people odd gifts) *and it was the only way she could make it work* though this part made laugh like HECK which is why I'm so surprised people actually like it o.o *will go back and re-read in a sec* to see ( ... )
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Okay! Back. I can't find the words to tell you how good this was. Heck, there's only one word I think qulifies this (excuse me if I exagerate, but I don,t know any other english words that compare to this): Nirvana. Seriously, girl, you outdid yourself to write this one, I can tell! Write something like this again, please? A sequel, maybe? *puppy dog eyes*
Damn, just thinking about the fic makes me hot... I'm gonna have to take another shower.
Oh, and I liked Allen being nicknamed 'The Joker'. The name fits him quite proudly.
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Ahaha all I can say is I'm...really surprised. As in. Really surprised O.O I almost feel bad, actually because I was laughing through like ALL of this while writing. And I know half of it is the comments my girlfriend made when she edited this XD
But one of the comments she made--and the reason I ENDED the fic the way I did was because I wasn't going to give a sequel XD I might budge if I get inspiration. But it's just too funny right now for me to think otherwise XD *that'll probably change though, maybe. possibly. I really can't tell you right now XD)
Yup it does (the nickname) and it's reminding me I need to get the RP caught up on here XD
but did it make ya feel better? *with your comp issues and stuff*
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-fapfapfap-
Oh.
Emm.
Eff.
GEEE.
...........yes. 8D
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And you stole my tag. Bad girl.
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that sounded oddly kinky. WHY?.........*cough* Am I? Are ya gonna punish me? *shot*
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Like I said yesterday.
I take my responsabilities ;)
You tell me <3
I knew you were gonna say that. What em I gonna do with you?
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somehow I picture a cat!girl who spilt her milk or something, and someone else petting her and saying that. Plz don't ask *headdesk*
and I knew that you were probably not going to be so surprised by that XD Um...I dunno? *tries not to say anything else kinky* goddammit YOUR FAULT~<3
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This sooo totally beat my Kanda stripper. *covers nose bleed*
awsome job (as always)!
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*hands you a tissue*
Um...thank you~ again I was laughing while writing most of this *girlfriend's fault* but really? Hee!~ I'm glad you liked it ^^
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