Comments | harmony283: [Fic] Joker

harmony283

[Fic] Joker

Dec 19, 2009 23:29

J-Joker
Fandom: D. Gray Man
Pairing: Allen x Lavi
Summary: Why so…british? -YGTAS REFERENCE- *shot*
A/N: Dual fill. One for the DGM kink meme ( pt 2, last page) and one obviously for the ABC fic meme I have going on, which also…this fill takes place in the RP me and Sam are doing right now…so it’s for 3 people? Also yes, you're allowed to be ( Read more... )

i blame my girlfriend, i swear i make sense, allen, dark!allen, allen x lavi, lavi, hohohohoh, dual fill = own journal, merry christmas? 8d, ygtas reference, british men aren't polite

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o///o nellaxival December 22 2009, 15:44:34 UTC

wow, this is soooo hooot... *0* great job writing! I love how you characterized allen's Darker, Sexier side. its very well done here, and i dont see it often, so BRAVO! :3 now pardon me whilst I go clean up with nosebleed. *flounces away*

^////^ harmony283 December 22 2009, 15:53:13 UTC

w-hyyy do so many people like this? XD

well Joker (dark!allen) comes into play a lot later on the RP so...I'm glad you like the way I characterize him XD annnd here *hands you a tissue* since I've got some extra~ XD

^.^ nellaxival December 22 2009, 16:44:01 UTC

(so many people like it because its epic m'dear.)

ooooh o.o sounds like an unteresting RP. whats the gist of the plot you have going?

*accepts Tissue* <.,<

XD harmony283 December 22 2009, 19:56:05 UTC

even when it made me laugh like, the entire time I wrote it? *blinkkkks*

Uh...well I upload the parts (in VERY raw format) on this journal...I can link you to the first one because, uh, basically right now it's geared towards characterization (it's called Bad Romance if that gives any indication of the plot) but we DID come up with a plot (that involves the Earl, and the creation of the Black Order and whatnot) It's currently over 330 pages and we haven't gotten to the deeper plot yet. but we NEED time to explain why the heck X is paired with Y because there are some UNUSUAL pairings in this RP. And I MEAN unusual

err so if you don't mind that *just had someone tell her off rather rudely for the pairing list, so she's not sure if she wants to give it out again* then...yeah I can link you to the first part *nod*

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meggle_star December 22 2009, 21:04:10 UTC

.....HOTDAMN. XD

That was like, an epic senses feast. Taste, smell, touch, everything. And the fact that Lavi is hot/bothered/uncomfortable makes it epic. Mmmm, I loved it. <33

And... the hammer. I thought it was going to be a whip, seriously, but... it was a hammer! -wasn't expecting it-

And..

"The lavender-blonde hummed" <-- "So Happy I Could Die", eh? XDD

harmony283 December 24 2009, 07:27:16 UTC

XD YES apparently, maybe

hahaaaa...and I already told you how much this made me laugh so I don't see it but--but--yay? XD

Well yeah XDD that was one song they were listening to in teh club before Supermassive Black Hole came on XD

hakasha December 24 2009, 03:05:30 UTC

god, the hotness of this fic. it BURNSSS

(gaah, I had written a comment here before and clicked 'post' and left but now I came back to my laptop and saw that it wasn't posted and had to run back to my father's office and beg for a few more minutes of internet and grrr lost the previous stuff I'd written but, well. anyway-)

I love the way you write Allen. I absolutely love your Allen. Love. Loooooooove. Big time love. Your Kanda and Lavi are usually perfect or at least very good, but your Allen is, too!

I drool at the feet of stripper!Allen and cry- no, beg for more. Also, this fic was a pleasure for the senses. A tasty fic indeed, hmm-hmmm. Such vivid imagery. I'm going to dream about this tonight, I'm sure. and I'm most definitely not complaining. can I haz moar of this, please? *holds up bowl Oliver Twist style*

harmony283 December 24 2009, 07:12:35 UTC

I feel REALLY bad for laughing at it now T^T WHY DO SO MANY PEOPLE LIKE IT?

O_O that....sucks ^^; well at least you got it posted?

Haha well ever since I started playing him in the RP...I started to really really like him though even before then I was told I was good at him (dunno why cuz he wasn't really my fav) but that's good at least XD

blame my girlfriend for the way this one ended XD SERIOUSLY *points to her cuz she's now on the guest bed* and yes I could write more but then it wouldn't be so...gosh darn funny :3

though I might cave. Just might. Cuz you know how I am XD

hakasha December 24 2009, 16:07:58 UTC

BECAUSE IT'S BURNING HOT. WHICH IS AWESOME. how can you not see the awesomeness?

yeah. and now I have a few more minutes of Internets! I can check my e-mail! *way too excited since she's barely been able to lately*

oh, your girlfriend's there already? yay xD hope you two have fun. and I like how it ended! I wouldn't mind if you left it as it is as long you occasioanally did more other stuffs like this from now on!

Oh... my... lovelylurker December 31 2009, 22:39:12 UTC

Gawd. That was so freaking hot. And I actually LISTENED to the song while reading and and and if I were CAPABLE of a nosebleed I would be having one.

*slides off couch and lies on the floor, twitching*

O_O *fans* harmony283 January 1 2010, 00:46:27 UTC

I give up asking why people like this T^T

I'm...glad...you...liked it? (and I'm glad the music fit ^^; *was kinda worried there for a sec* but it fits Allen...kinda XD and strip/pole dancing so....*excuses/excuses*) and...ahhaa *not capable of having nosebleeds to this kind of thing* especially not this piece. I was laughing too damned much XD *feels really bad about that though*

*continues fanning you*