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harmony283

Mottled Ink 2/?

Oct 19, 2009 10:34

Chapter Title: Home
Rating: T
A/N: Chapter 2 up. Not much else to say except...this suddenly connects to something else I just typed 8 pages up of. And a question: Do I write too much? (Also: How old is Bridget? Do we know yet?)

Warning(s): Drinking, people not studying when they should. Quotes from roommate about Pre-Cal books...um...yeah and that's ( Read more... )

lenalee, fanfiction, komui, bridget faye, klaud, miranda lotto, lavi

Comments 5

ashoakandthorn October 19 2009, 20:52:09 UTC

Family shenanigans. Fun times.

No.
I'm guessing Bridget is in her late 20s/early 30s.

I think you mean he's bi, not his

harmony283 October 19 2009, 21:44:07 UTC

yes, aren't they? XD It gets even worse in the next chapter...*is having too much fun with Bridget*

No? (to me writing too much? *is already halfway done with 11-20 on the themes)

That's what I'm going to assume, I mean, she certainly looks it ^^;

Ack! Thanks! *goes to change

hakasha October 21 2009, 16:28:59 UTC

I was kinda surprised that the 'friend' who Lavi liked to annoy was Allen and not Kanda xD But then again it makes sense, considering Lenalee's next comment after she said that.

anyway, twas a nice chappy... poor Lavi, he always has so much trouble to deal with *wants to hug him* will we see him again in the next chapter? *ish hopeful*

harmony283 October 21 2009, 19:40:36 UTC

Ahah well yes, it will also make sense in later chapters as well (when you actually meet Kanda. Because he currently isn't in the picture yet). Though you may be surprised by him, I actually have 8 pages typed up of...his side of the story that will...connect...with this in a strange sort of way, and explain things. *nod*

he does, doesn't he? *wanted to take a different stab and have Lavi be really rich, and not 'poor' or...lowerclass like many AU fics tend to take it* though Pressure is guilty of this too but...

as for if he will be? Hum, well, you have some drama that focuses around Bridget, and then you miiight see him. Maybe. sorta. Hum. *still debating*

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harmony283 November 6 2009, 23:38:08 UTC

it's fine XD You commented now, didn't you? Glad you liked it~ yup. hints. you'll get more later, but as of right nooow~~

Ah, yeah it does seem like that, doesn't it? But she's trying to explain to Miranda about...stuff. And since I'm basing Miranda a bit off of me--I don't talk much. Only listen, because (especially in a case where the person speaking knows more than I do) I don't want to make any assumptions or whatnot *nod* make sense?