fic: Only Fools (9/9)

Jan 16, 2010 17:03

TITLE: ONLY FOOLS
FANDOM: SG-1
PAIRING: Daniel/Vala. Minor other pairings, including a slash one.
GENRE: Romance/Humour/Action-Adventure/Angst/AU. It's a plethora of genres, lets see how I make them work together.
RATING: R
WARNINGS/SPOILERS: None, AU of crack is cracky. I have no shame in this.
SUMMARY: In the waters of the Caribbean lie ( Read more... )

ship: daniel/vala, tv: gateverse, !fanfic

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hariboo January 17 2010, 01:11:20 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was so much fun to write. :D

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dannysgirlsg1 January 16 2010, 18:30:35 UTC
*claps* Yaaay! Excellent ending! I'm sad to see it end. It'd been a while since I'd been eagerly waiting for a fic to be updated like I've been with this one.

Wonderful job, of course.

Also - Shell Game FTW! XD

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hariboo January 17 2010, 01:14:53 UTC
Aww, thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed the ride.

Also - Shell Game FTW! XD - never let it be said I'm not shameless with my referencing. :D

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campylobacter January 17 2010, 01:12:02 UTC
dialed the only number that came to mind

Jaaaaaack! I love how the best fanfic -- gen and non-gen -- works with ship AND slash goggles.

Back on the Gateship, Cameron was being followed Rodney, Carson and Carolyn. Five minutes ago Cam got a call from Sam, and four minutes ago he left Carolyn's room ready to leave and save his friends. Three minutes ago he called Tealc and told him meet them half way. And now he was on his way to meet with John and Landry on the lower deck. Rodney was griping about the rescue, while Carson was fretting over Vala. Carolyn silent by his side.

SO. Much. Team. Squee. Here! Love it! I can't decide whether I prefer 'shippy moments or team-y moments better, but when they occur in the same story, I get all swoony and fall off my chair.

"They might need a doctor."

Oh, Carolyn. I'm so in love with her now.

Aiming at the running man, he fired.

Baal, you evil piece of sh... shark food.

Kanan, still struggling with the knife at his thigh, got caught up in the wave. Vala couldn't bring herself to care.I'm ( ... )

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hariboo January 17 2010, 01:42:41 UTC
You and your epic comments seriously just made me so happy during the duration of posting this fic. You always pick out some of my favourite lines and have the funniest and awesomest comments to add. Seriously, I love your comments.

I can't decide whether I prefer 'shippy moments or team-y moments better, but when they occur in the same story, I get all swoony and fall off my chair.

I know! I'm the same way! I love my shippy moments but team moments are just equally wonderful so I always try to have an equal amount in my fic, well, the fics that aren't right out an excuse to have sexy times. And even then, I never say no to a teamy moment of teasing. :D And yay for Carolyn love. She's such a great character.

ROTFL Baal: dresses like Liberace, and flies ostentatious, pimped-out aircraft.HEE. Oh, Baal, I really did go full on camp with him in this fic. I feel as a character he had such potential to be an Uber Campy Badguy in the show but Cliff Simon played him so deliciously evil, but still, somewhere in some verse Baal is a total ( ... )

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campylobacter January 17 2010, 05:39:32 UTC
somewhere in some verse Baal is a total pimp

I would just about PAY for someone to do a Ba'al fanvid to "It's Hard Out Here for a Pimp".

a tour now: places where Daniel and Vala almost died (and had sex)Fan conventions around the globe could have travel agency booths devoted to that ( ... )

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hariboo January 17 2010, 11:37:53 UTC
I would just about PAY for someone to do a Ba'al fanvid to "It's Hard Out Here for a Pimp".

I honestly cannot believe it hasn't been done before!!!

I'm actually relieved that my comments weren't annoying to you or perceived as pseudo-Mystery Science Theater 3000 wankery. =:-o

Oh, no! Not at all! I live for long comments/reviews. Hell, I live for short ones. I've been sucky about answering to all the comments in all the chapters because of life and uni, but since this is the last chapter I'm trying to be better about it.

Ah yes, the joys of being a fic writer. Which is not to say I don't love fic, because I do. I love it so much, but I totally get what you're saying. Sometimes it's nice to know that people enjoyed what you wrote. :)

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hummingfly67 January 17 2010, 15:58:39 UTC
Millenium Falcon and Shell Game - love! Like I said in an earlier comment, the shout-outs were great.

Very entertaining. Great humor, interesting storyline and of course Daniel and Vala.

Thanks for a great read! And perhaps a set-up for the further adventures of D&V (& crew)? (El Destino)

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hariboo January 17 2010, 17:41:51 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked! :D

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hummingfly67 January 17 2010, 17:48:27 UTC
Eh-hem... And perhaps a set-up for the further adventures of D&V (& crew)?

hint, hint. : )

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hariboo January 17 2010, 17:56:28 UTC
I wish I could say yes, but with school and life I don't think I could even start thinking about it. I love this verse so very much, but there just never was plans for sequel.

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oltha_heri January 25 2010, 00:37:55 UTC
I loved this fic, not in least because it means I will save myself from actually watching Fools Gold 'cause I've got the better Stargat-ier version going into my mems.

I think it is so great how you get every one together, and all the side ships I love (including John/Elizabeth making Jack wanna gag, woohoo). The shout outs to canon, like Tealc's boat being the Millenium Falcon, and random Bratac were brilliant. I also love the reference in the first chapter to The Dauntless.

It was an old compressor that should have never been stolen from the junkyard it was found in
That line is kind of like the epitome of what I love about this fic. The twist on the turn of phrase was fantastic.

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hariboo January 25 2010, 14:48:29 UTC
I will save myself from actually watching Fools Gold 'cause I've got the better Stargat-ier version going into my mems.

NGL, it makes me feel proud to have saved the masses and let them have the (imo) better Stargate version. :D it really changes the movie for me.

I also love the reference in the first chapter to The Dauntless.

I THINK YOU'RE THE FIRST ONE TO MENTION. YOU GET A COOKIE! But I'm glad you liked all my little shout outs, they were so of my favourite bits to write, especially the bit with Jack and J/E. It was a last minute addition. :D

I'm so glad you like it. Thank you!

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