Comments | hardtime100: HT100 Challenge #130: Amnesty - Revisit of #64

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HT100 Challenge #130: Amnesty - Revisit of #64 - Dress Up

Jan 05, 2008 20:10

It's been a while since I've done one of these. 100 words.

-----------------It had called to him, wanting to be claimed. He reached for it, somewhat expecting some transformation from the moment he put it on. Instead, it was small and tight and unflattering. Surely, there was some other way, some better way for it to be worn. He adjusted it ( Read more... )

ch 130 amnesty 2008, ch 064 dress up, w: cmk418

Comments 8

colleendetroit January 6 2008, 08:47:37 UTC

I like it!! =o) Kind of gave me the chills...Simon as a Muslim.

cmk418 January 6 2008, 15:57:49 UTC

Hee! Wouldn't that be something?

ozsaur January 7 2008, 04:17:48 UTC

Heee! Simon would absolutely try Said's kufi.

cmk418 January 7 2008, 04:54:41 UTC

I think he'd stay away from the prayer beads though. Glad you liked it.

michele659 January 8 2008, 00:45:43 UTC

This captured the relationship between the two of them. Adebisis knew he could never be Said, but there was a part of him that wanted what he had. That peace. He also wanted to possess part of him. In the end he couldn't have either.
I liked this. It was sweet and sad at the same time.

cmk418 January 8 2008, 01:31:04 UTC

Thank you.

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cmk418 January 13 2008, 08:03:13 UTC

Thank you. Adebisi/Said has been on my to-do list for quite some time now, but I'm not sure when the plot-bunny that has me scurrying off to the keyboard will strike. But I love the first part (obviously!) of Season 4 just for the way that the two play off each other before it all comes to its tragic screeching halt.

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cmk418 January 14 2008, 22:59:41 UTC

Oh wow, of course, I don't mind. And if you haven't seen this yet, I highly recommend it as one of my favorite Adebisi/Said drabbles.