Challenge #6: Freeforall. "Through Tomorrow"

[serialkeller]

It was hella-hard to get this down to 108 words. Oh well, better luck next time.He couldn't go back to sleep now. So instead he gripped Keller's hand, willing him to fall into sleep's forgiving arms. But sleep wouldn't come easy for Chris that night. A pained expression creased his features, his sleep-soaked mumblings as crazed as one would

Comments

[alinewrites]

Oh, I just love the analogy with Toby's children. It's so heartbreaking! Very nicely done!

[rowanfairchild]

:-( Oh, my poor woobie! I think that scene was the most vulnerable we ever saw Chris, and this really evokes it, Trask. It sure worked on me!
-R

[maverick4oz]

Wow. Very moody and I mean that as a compliment. This one slow burns. Thanks.