You Dismantle Me [2]

Oct 09, 2009 01:07

            “And this kid thinks he’s the smartest guy in the world! It’s like he thinks he owns the class!” Brendon threw his hands in the air as he told his friend Ian about Ryan. Next to him Ian rolled his eyes.

“I bet he doesn’t think he rules the class. You are just a jackass when it comes to academics.”

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xnovacine_rushx October 11 2009, 19:06:19 UTC
Oh dear!
I love this chappy though :]
Brendon is so obliviously mean.
Brendon should throw his bag! That would be hella funny!
Wonderful writing skillz <3

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harbored_secret October 11 2009, 20:31:32 UTC
Aww thank you :)

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bucake October 11 2009, 19:14:07 UTC
for some reason i hadnt read the first chapter :|

this story sounds good, i love how you're writing brendon
very love-to-hate atm :)

option a!

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harbored_secret October 11 2009, 20:32:23 UTC
No worries, the chapter wasn't going anywhere.
Thank you very much :)

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vivheartsrydon October 11 2009, 22:22:21 UTC
This fic is not only great as an idea and plot but the fact that you give the privilege of choice to the readers shows a lot of creativity from your part!I like it very much and i love the way it's written!Brendon's character is very obnoxious but you can't help but to like him,and Ryan is Ryan!Just wonderful!And i like the fact that Brendon is the arrogant asshole-ish guy and not Ryan!And i chhose b.I love Ryden fist fights! xx

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harbored_secret October 13 2009, 15:14:32 UTC
Aww thank you.
Your comment made me really happy :)

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harbored_secret October 13 2009, 15:15:54 UTC
You never know what could happen.
Thank you :)

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tadxbitxlate October 11 2009, 23:29:53 UTC
awesomee upddatee!
uhmm #2 cause i feel like Ryan hes gotten punched sometime in his life by Brendon.

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harbored_secret October 13 2009, 15:17:19 UTC
Thank you thank you :)

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