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IN OUR EYES CHAPTER TWO

May 02, 2010 00:17

Title: IN OUR EYES Chapter Two
Author: Hanub
Paring: Edward/Jacob
Rating: PG to become NC-17
Warnings: A little bit of AU
Summary: Edward stops thinking too much to go for what his instincts asks him to.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Twilight characters, they belong to Stephanie Meyer. No money is being made from this.

AN: Something tells me I did ( Read more... )

slash, edward/jacob, r, twilight saga, fanfiction

Comments 10

dark_wing21 May 2 2010, 06:16:22 UTC

'since they were living on their honeymoon.'

I think you mean leaving for their honeymoon.

preferito, vincollo della vita...ARRGH, I don't speak whatever language it is so I don't know what it means, although I could guess on the former.

And I find it interesting we're updating our fics at almost the same time.

Anyway, it's a great chapter. Couldn't wait for more (^^)

Ups... hanub May 2 2010, 07:25:00 UTC

And I checked it twice... I think I may have a problem with long words >.<, sorry about that, yes it was supposed to be "leaving", I'll pay more attention next time.
Preferito: Favorite
Vincolo della vita: Life bond.
It's Italian and the explanation to that will come in the next chapter, thanks for reviewing ^^

omg bloodrednight25 May 2 2010, 08:06:26 UTC

That was a hella good chapter so can't wait to read the next on. Update soon

Thank you hanub May 3 2010, 00:50:39 UTC

Thank you!! I was kind of disappointed with the chapter, so I'm really glad you liked it. I'll try not to take to long to post the next chapter ^^

raingoddess2040 May 2 2010, 15:56:00 UTC

AWESOMESAUCE CHAPTER!!! I love it.... All the heat and animosity and lust! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Thank you, thank you!!! hanub May 3 2010, 01:20:10 UTC

Thank you!! Your comment really cheered me up!! I'll work hard not to let you down in the next chapter. Thanks ^///^

duchesscarml May 3 2010, 03:22:41 UTC

Okay, that was greatg!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! OMG!! What the hell was that with Jacob!?! But, Lord I wanted them to continue... *sigh* That was great! Update soon! ~Duchess

^__^ hanub May 3 2010, 04:18:15 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it. I'll try to get the next chapter soon. And don't worry, they will continue what they left unfinished here n_~

agape_eternal May 3 2010, 09:22:51 UTC

This is really good so far. I can't wait for more.

I´ll work hard hanub May 4 2010, 02:10:35 UTC

Thanks, I0m really happy you liked it, and I'll work hard to get the next part soon ^^