a love letter, best left undedicated

Dec 21, 2015 02:29

a love letter, best left undedicated
3,080w; pg-13 (jb/jr)
but that doesn't matter.
a/n: ok, now i have no excuses, i'm just late. for kirakirashahida - i loved your prompt too much and ended up struggling with it more than i thought i would slkgskjfd please don't hate me even though this is not very good ;; also inspired by this image. ilu ♥♥♥

he didn't, on the other hand, quite know the twenty-one year old jinyoung sitting across from him at the food court, fingers tapping a rhythm on the table between them. )

pairing: jb/jr, rating: pg-13, #kisoap, #2015holidayadvent, fandom: got7, #oneshot

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kisoap December 21 2015, 10:35:09 UTC
kirakirashahida December 21 2015, 11:35:56 UTC
READING THE FIRST LINE AND ALREADY WEEPING ASKFJKSDJNFKSJHK

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kirakirashahida December 21 2015, 13:20:58 UTC
picking up the remaining pieces of my heart left as i comment

this is so ???? sad?????? all these years jinyoung has been loving jaebum quietly, and idk jaebum never had a clue? or he did but was too scared to admit that maybe he likes jinyoung too? sob what a tragic ending for two people who used to be best friends :(

do i regret allowing you to make this extra angsty? NOPE

and of course i need to mention how you inserted jb/hyejeong ♥♥♥♥♥ love you so much sapphy! thanks for writing this for me i really enjoy it ♥

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kisoap December 21 2015, 23:04:05 UTC
would you like some duct tape to stick those pieces back together?

yeah, i was thinking "how sad would it be if jinyoung liked jaebum all these years and he knew he could never tell him" and that became this fic and childhood friends drifting apart makes me very sad so ): some part of me inside died when i wrote the last two scenes hAHA

originally there was supposed to be more hyejeong but i kept getting stuck so u___u i will write more jb/hyejeong in the future hopefully ♥♥♥ i'm so glad you enjoyed this, though! ;;;; ♥♥♥♥♥

lol this was literally my outline for your fic:

... )

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hipployta December 22 2015, 14:33:31 UTC
This ending is too realistic...aww so sad

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kisoap December 26 2015, 08:45:00 UTC
i was sad writing it ;; thank you so much for reading! ♥

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exquisitetalk January 3 2016, 12:19:50 UTC
when i saw the year:
2011 and then 2015

i was like, freaking that was the year i fell in love too and yeah i am still in love in 2015 and till this day. i rolled in bed when i saw and realized that this is almost the same to what i did. except i didn't see him for a long time and counting.

this is beautifully written! thank you for writing this! <3 <3 <3

/weep silently in corner/

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rudolphy January 14 2016, 22:35:02 UTC

authornim this so well-written :----( i can really relate and i didn't even realize im crying :-----(

if i could give you a trophy, i would

so here you go

btw im begging you as much as i really adored how realistic this is and how it's really well-put and i couldn't ask for more bUT AUTHORNIM IDC IF THEY'LL BE BOYFRIENDS OR WHATEVER BUT PLS LET THEM TALK LET THEM SCREAM AT EACH OTHER LET THEM CRY THEIR HEARTS OUT

because at the end of the day, it matters.

Anyways, i hope you'll write a sequel but if not it's okay. We've all been there before having someone close to our hearts become a stranger, but then im still hoping that ppl can go through that wall (made by themselves ofc) even just for this fic then my soul will be contented.

WHAT AM I SAYING?! HAHAHAHA obviously you've written it so well I became a wreck lmao

ps: tysm for this and keep on writing fics you are really really good at it sml ♡♡♡

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kirakirashahida March 31 2016, 17:21:43 UTC
i just want you to know that i come back here regularly and tear up every single time

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