Comments | hannah_asakura: Complicated

hannah_asakura

Complicated

Aug 23, 2012 10:19

Complicated

Genre: Drama Romance

Rating: M

Pairing: (mainly) Norway x Iceland

Summary: "He's my brother!" Denmark eyes widened when Norway shouted at him, lips trembling as a flash of memories ran back to his mind. Their moments before Denmark went inside were enough to make him crazy. Iceland gave a hard sob.

Disclaimer: I don't own Axis Power ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

hoshiko_2000 August 23 2012, 14:18:49 UTC

Nice fic! This handled a delicate subject very well :).

Btw, just to let you know, you spelt 'gritted' as 'greeted' in the fith paragraph. But aside from that one minor spelling mistake, a really brilliantly written fic. I can see this becoming a series :).

hannah_asakura August 26 2012, 06:05:05 UTC

:D Thanks for the review ^^ and I've fixed that. sorry xD Hmm :) I wonder why both comments were screened. ><; anyway to fix that? So that every time someone posted I dont have to unscreen it, and it will immediately viewed *_*

Anyway :3 thank you

hoshiko_2000 August 26 2012, 14:08:27 UTC

It's probably to do with your security settings. Normally comments aren't screened on default, so you've probably unknowingly set it on 'screen comments' somehow.

Update: Yep, when I posted this comment it came up with 'according to this journals settings your comment will be screened' - it's something to do with your journal settings. Go on 'account settings' or 'account manager' and you should probably be able to fix it.

hannah_asakura August 27 2012, 01:02:48 UTC

:0 hmm what about now? xD; I think I've fixed that lol :3

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fujyoshi73 August 24 2012, 03:34:53 UTC

D'awwwwwwwww, this was really sweet!! <3 You don't see much NorIce stuff so seeing this made me happy. Great job :D (^-^)b

hannah_asakura August 26 2012, 06:05:18 UTC

:D Thanks for the review ^^ -hugs-

esonador August 27 2012, 19:21:57 UTC

Awwww :)

Firstly - thank you so much for this :) Coz this was the first time I've read ff about those two.

And secondly - thanks for writing it so beautifuly. Although I love smut....just reading about someone who is dealing with his "wrong" feelings was very satisfying. I can't express myself enough how much I loved Norway,Iceland....and Denmark too.

hannah_asakura August 28 2012, 12:03:34 UTC

Thank you for the review ^^ Yea, I saw not many fics for them. but there's quiet some fic in fanfiction.net ;) if you wanna check them out. I do enjoying myself writing the three of them. I've been wanting too, I'm glad I found some plot for them and able to put it in words. They just need more love xD