Complicated

[hannah_asakura]

Complicated

Genre: Drama Romance

Rating: M

Pairing: (mainly) Norway x Iceland

Summary: "He's my brother!" Denmark eyes widened when Norway shouted at him, lips trembling as a flash of memories ran back to his mind. Their moments before Denmark went inside were enough to make him crazy. Iceland gave a hard sob.

Disclaimer: I don't own Axis Power

Comments

[hoshiko_2000]

Nice fic! This handled a delicate subject very well :).

Btw, just to let you know, you spelt 'gritted' as 'greeted' in the fith paragraph. But aside from that one minor spelling mistake, a really brilliantly written fic. I can see this becoming a series :).

[hannah_asakura]

:D Thanks for the review ^^ and I've fixed that. sorry xD Hmm :) I wonder why both comments were screened. ><; anyway to fix that? So that every time someone posted I dont have to unscreen it, and it will immediately viewed *_*

Anyway :3 thank you

[hoshiko_2000]

It's probably to do with your security settings. Normally comments aren't screened on default, so you've probably unknowingly set it on 'screen comments' somehow.

Update: Yep, when I posted this comment it came up with 'according to this journals settings your comment will be screened' - it's something to do with your journal settings. Go on 'account settings' or 'account manager' and you should probably be able to fix it.

[hannah_asakura]

:0 hmm what about now? xD; I think I've fixed that lol :3

[hoshiko_2000]

Hmmm, let's see...

Yep, you've fixed it :P. Settings can be a bugger. I've had trouble with mine in the past ^^;. Good you've managed to fix it.