The steps of recovery; PG-13; 2/?

[hangoverday]

Jinki was happy his car had been fixed so quickly. It was cold outside and he didn’t feel like waiting for a bus in this weather. He was driving trough quiet suburbia as he spotted a familiar figure walking down the road. Jinki pulled over and opened the window.

“Hop in before you freeze to death”, Jinki shouted to Taemin who nearly fell

Comments

[linnhe]

I like that you changed the POV, and at the same time I didn't because I wanted to know what Key had been up to that it needed a scarf to cover it up :D
No srsly, POV change is love, especially because it's not every paragraph or even sentence like some fics out there

I lol'd at Taemin saying 'when I grow up'
you're 18 bb how much more growing up are you planning to do?

And I liked that they were listening to Shinee in the car. Mindfuck!

I'm obviously completely into your characters, I'm talking to them inside my head

[hangoverday]

Thanks for your opinions. I actually enjoy writing from Key's POV the most but oh well.

There's no way I'm going to write smut so I'm just avoiding it as much as I can lol. Okay well get me drunk and I'd probably end up writing some NC-35 stuff.

I just keep wishing Taemin would never grow up (okay maybe a bit so he wouldn't be illegal anymore but that's beyond the point).

Ahaha omg really :D I think that's like the coolest thing I've ever heard