[b.a.p] like salt in your hair

Sep 06, 2014 10:33

Who: Yongguk, Himchan; Jongup; Younjae, Zelo
What: 8.2k, G
Summary: THEY ARE PIRATES. (except, being B.A.P, they basically fail at every single check on the runsheet... so nothing really happens.)

For suitofarmour at thebrowniebunch exchange. ♥ THERE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE AN EXTRA ENDING WITH YOUNGLO + ACTUAL DAEHYUN but then i... will do that later. *3*; (wahhh also thank you ( Read more... )

member: jongup, group: b.a.p, member: youngjae, member: yongguk, member: zelo, member: himchan

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suitofarmour September 6 2014, 00:40:54 UTC
JOOOOO I'M FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW JOOOO OH MY GOD YOU MADE THEM PIRATES. PIRATES. THEY ARE PIRATES

DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW

PIRATES

I AM GOING TO READ NOW

PLEASE KNOW THAT I FUCKING LOVE YOUUUU OH MY GOD YOU ARE BRILLIANT

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haneyon September 6 2014, 00:44:24 UTC
OMG IT WAS JUST YOUR AWESOME PROMPTS IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!! akjahkjawe i just hope this lives up to them even a little bit *A*; for real i started writing them all and couldn't decide which to focus on until like two weeks ago LOL /rolls about

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suitofarmour September 6 2014, 01:28:58 UTC
"The time is now," the Prince says again for, it seems, dramatic purpose alone

HIMCHAN

"...he has a boat. And sails around."

he has A BOAT AND HE SAILS AROUND shrieks BOAT ADVENTURES ARE MY FAVOURITE ADVENTURES HOW DID YOU KNOW

"Then we shall find him," the Prince decides. Decrees. YEEEES

"Make it so." MAKE IT SOOO OH MY GOD i don't know if you intended this but i am def thinking star trek right now and i am so SO PLEASED look at the space + pirates ahhhh /o\

There's a lot to arrange in preparation for a royal adventure. A ROYAL ADVENTURE

I PROBABLY SHOULDN'T QUOTE YOU THAT ENTIRE FIRST BANGCHAN PART WITH "PRINCESS" BUT OMFG I WANT TO. BECAUSE I LOVE IT SO MUCH. PERFECT. ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. ALSO, THE BEST.

And maybe, if the night is fine, a night out under the stars with that country cabinboy after everyone else has gone to bed, talking about everything else and nothing in particular at all.

Maybe. (Maybe not. He'll see if he feels like it later.)

OHOHO WITH THAT CABIN BOY, EH YOUNGJAE~~~ I SEE YOU~~~

It takes ( ... )

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suitofarmour September 6 2014, 01:29:10 UTC
omg character limit

okay i really meant to keep copy and pasting bits as i was reading but then i got so caught up in the end ;____; i love the whole thing ;___;

OH JO THANK YOU SO MUCH. THIS FIC IS GLORIOUS. GLORIOUS. pirates and found families are my favourite things and you TOTALLY WROTE THEM and i am simply beside myself right now, honestly, how am i supposed to be articulate when i am this overwhelmed by your awesome, huh, how? short answer is i am just gonna flail over here for a while omfg

please do not worry, omg. you took my silly prompts and made the most AMAZING stories out of them and this is so much more than i was expecting, oh my goodness. ;____;

I LOVE YOU. :D <3 THIS IS THE BEST. THANK YOU. :D <3

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andnowforyaya September 6 2014, 17:45:02 UTC
oh my god this is the sweetest pirate!fic ever ahhhh it's so great and glorious *__*

i love how it builds??? the little glimpses into each character and the way they think and everyone feels very fleshed out but the writing is so tight???? and wonderful???? i'm not making sense probably but basically there was a really really slow smile creeping onto my face the more i read and by the end of it i looked like a fool

the banghim was so sweet! and understated. and perfect. ahhhhhhhhhh

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andnowforyaya September 6 2014, 17:45:30 UTC
PS I WOULD READ THE FUCK OUT OF MORE OF THIS AU IF YOU EVER FEEL INCLINED TO WRITE IT :D

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suitofarmour September 7 2014, 08:19:37 UTC
HELL FUCKIN YEAH

(ps did you guys ever meet?!)

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saxophonic23 September 6 2014, 20:59:57 UTC
Pirates omg ugH UGH BANGHIM UGH lol this was so much fun! I was grinning everywhere and nervous and ahh this was excellent to read thank you~~~

Also "this Captain looks like he has avian bones and will blow away at the slightest turn of a strong wind" 100% agreement omg yes

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golden_kimono September 8 2014, 20:33:47 UTC
I never knew I needed pirate fic until I read this. I love the slow build-up, the snarkiness, the Banghim! ♥ It was so cute and silly and instantly put me in a good mood. :) I, for one, am definitely in favour of an extra editing! And anything else you can write in this 'verse, really.

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arysthaeniru September 9 2014, 06:01:38 UTC
This is super awesome! I love the pirates verse! I also adoooorrree the slow build and any of Youngjae's commentary! Ahhh, this was cuuutttee

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