Original Fiction: "Dancing Shoes"

May 31, 2016 12:22

Title: Dancing Shoes
Fandom: Traditional Fairytales
Rating: G
Summary: Sweet slumber eludes them all.
Author's Notes: For the writerverse challenge #4 Bingo Table of Doom, this is "Till the Street Lights Came On ( Read more... )

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bleodswean May 31 2016, 21:32:47 UTC
Oooooooooh! I like this small poetic drabble, K! It's like a morality tale encapsulated! Nice work!

And glad to see you writing!

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halfshellvenus June 1 2016, 06:12:05 UTC
It's an abstraction of the prompt toward a fairytale, which oddly enough was the first thing that came to mind.

Dancing the night away seems like such fun, unless you never really wanted to and you cannot stop.

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tsuki_no_bara June 1 2016, 03:42:45 UTC
this is a twist! i don't normally think of the dancing princesses dancing as punishment. i like it!

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halfshellvenus June 1 2016, 06:18:43 UTC
I can imagine wanting to sleep, night after night, and instead having to get up and travel underworld to that faraway place and dance until the sun comes up. Think how tired you would be!

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