Supernatural Gen Drabble: "Abundance" (G)

[halfshellvenus]

Title: Abundance
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam, Dean (Gen, Drabble)
Rating: G
Summary: Sometimes the middle of nowhere is a pretty good place to be.
Author's Notes: A writerverse team_prose entry on "Serendipity", written for the comment_fic prompt of Who could have known it was such a big sky?

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Comments

[devon99]

Lovely.

You remain my favourite drabbler. So evocative with so few words.

[halfshellvenus]

Thank you! The combination of those two prompts led me write to how I wanted to approach this drabble. They really suited each other well. :)

[tigriswolf]

Oh, that's gorgeous. Thank you!

[halfshellvenus]

You're welcome! Thanks for offering up that great prompt-- it was so evocative. :D

[tsuki_no_bara]

oh, i love this. i like how quiet it is.

[halfshellvenus]

I think it's the sleepiness of the mood that drives the quiet. That and the emptiness of where they are, other than the enormous and powerful presence of nature itself.

[roxymissrose]

Dean watches them slowly blur before his tired eyes. They glitter in his memory like distant ghosts as he finally falls asleep.

That's beautiful!

[halfshellvenus]

Thank you! I love the idea of the stars under such a big, clear sky being so amazing that they stay with you even as you're drifting off.

We just don't get a sense of that anymore, and it's kind of sad.

[desertport]

Perfect little moment between them. I love the intimacy of the scene.

[halfshellvenus]

Thank you! I love the setting as well-- being at peace with the "things that are out there" instead of at war with them makes for a nice change. :)