Comments | halfshellvenus: SPN Gen Drabble: "Let The Door Now Open" (Lucifer, Lilith, PG)

halfshellvenus

SPN Gen Drabble: "Let The Door Now Open" (Lucifer, Lilith, PG)

Dec 29, 2010 00:14

Title: Let The Door Now Open
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Lucifer, Lilith (Gen, Drabble)
Rating: PG
Summary: Of all Lucifer's handmaidens, Lilith will pay the highest price.
Author's Notes: Written for an insmallpackages request.
Also for supernatural100, this is "Anticipation."

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( Lucifer listened as Lilith wove her circle... )

spn_s4_fic, spn_ep_based_fic, my_fic, sn_gen, drabbles

Comments 10

devon99 December 29 2010, 22:37:41 UTC

Nicely done. Your use of language and choice of words felt very precise and very 'Lucifer'.

halfshellvenus December 30 2010, 09:31:28 UTC

Thank you! His is a POV I certainly haven't written before, so this was an interesting fic request to fulfill. :)

spirited_lizard January 2 2011, 00:13:08 UTC

Nicely written!

halfshellvenus January 2 2011, 04:44:02 UTC

Thank you! Definitely new territory. :)

melanth0 January 2 2011, 00:31:15 UTC

oh, pretty. ♥ my favorite line is the second to last.

Thank you so much for writing my wish!

halfshellvenus January 2 2011, 06:17:46 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I hadn't thought about Lucifer's potential relationship with Lilith until I came across your wish, but given what she made possible for him... she must have been a very faithful servant and he might have had much more than a passing relationship with her.

Thanks so much for putting this idea out there-- I hope I did it justice for you. :)

etoile444 January 2 2011, 01:22:17 UTC

delicious! I pictured it in my mind.

halfshellvenus January 2 2011, 06:19:07 UTC

That's exactly the kind of thing I like to hear!

The way that scene in 4x22 unfolded, it was really interesting to see it from Lucifer's perspective (the flip side). It was the beginning of everything for him, and Lilith and Ruby made it possible.

dark_princess17 January 2 2011, 19:03:54 UTC

Hmm. Nice. Very good good for Lucifer. It's always good to see more from his perspective - especially when it's done well :D

halfshellvenus January 3 2011, 06:16:49 UTC

Thank you!

He turned out to be a much more interesting-- more complex-- character than I would have expected from network television, and it was fascinating to try out his POV, I must say.

Thanks for reading and commenting!