I did as told - after crossing the t's and dotting the i's to my story - and went and read all your stuff, and even left you feedback. Santa better be paying attention!
Thanks for the comment! I'm doing one of my papers but when I'm done [if I'm not wiped!] ill try to start my next chapter. So my first person doesn't suck? Yay. My third alwayz does tho. First comes naturally to me. Meh, oh well:)what one is your fave? Anddddd..... Whens your next chapter gonna be up!? Haha. I love yours!
I have to say Prayers is my fave so far. But I also liked Something To Talk About cause I was TOTALLY thinking about Olivia when I saw that scene of Conviction. lol... But you're right tho.. 3rd person/omnipotent isn't your strong point. :D Oh, I totally forgot to add in the review that you should get someone to poofread it. Not even beta but just to clean up punctuation and stuff so the story flows better.
I'm shooting for a once a week update on mine. We'll see how that goes!
cool, cool. thanks :) i like... S2TA. that literally just smacked me in the face one day. haha. andddd, coffee black b/c i was definitely drinking coffee that WASN'T black when i wrote it :-D
hahahaha we used to have three litre bottles, but I haven't seen them in so long. The only thing was, it was this really cheap brand, so the last litre or more was generally always flat no matter what you did, so it was a waste anyway, lol. and it was always too heavy to carry home anyway hahaha.
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I'm shooting for a once a week update on mine. We'll see how that goes!
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i like... S2TA. that literally just smacked me in the face one day. haha.
andddd, coffee black b/c i was definitely drinking coffee that WASN'T black when i wrote it :-D
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