Comments | haldoor_honey: Lost fic: By The Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Two

haldoor_honey

Lost fic: By The Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Two - Crazy For You

Apr 25, 2009 07:50

Title: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Two: Crazy For You

Pairing: Jack/Sayid, suggestions of Jack/Sawyer

Rating: PG-13 for language and suggestions

Word Count: 3689 this part

Beta: My good friend gregoria44, who makes such simple but effective suggestions. Thanks, love!

Disclaimer: I don't own Lost, nor do I make any money from my wild imaginings ( Read more... )

phoenix, lost: jack/sawyer/sayid, fps, lost fic, lost: sawyer, lost: jack/sayid

Comments 11

gregoria44 April 24 2009, 20:41:43 UTC

*blows smoke off fingers*

And it's not possible to make a silk purse out of a cow's ear, so job's a good 'un!!

:D

haldoor_honey April 24 2009, 22:01:45 UTC

Ah, you say that, but... anyway, thanks again, love - much appreciated! ;-)

lozateazer April 25 2009, 00:10:59 UTC

Pooooor Sawyer, all screwed up. I lovehate seeing him like that. Doesn't he realize he has the BEST POSSIBLE TEAM for recovery?? They have to at least be a better support system than Locke was for Charlie, and they succeeded! hahaha

And I have to say that I love that Sawyer knew where he was going before, and left a clue. Kind of like he didn't want to leave in the first place, and wanted Sayid to come after him.

Lovely chapter, m'dear!! Can't wait for more!!

haldoor April 25 2009, 08:50:21 UTC

Awww, we do like our beaten down Sawyer, don't we? That's true about Locke! Ha! I never thought of that!

Yeah, the clue was kinda last minute, I think - it inspired him where to go more than it was purposeful, but who knows what his subconscious was doing? *wink*

Thanks, love! ;-)

zelda_zee April 25 2009, 06:14:16 UTC

I'm intrigued - I want to know what's wrong with Sawyer! He's clearly gotten himself into some kind of deep shit and I can only hope that Jack and Sayid are going to be able to make it all better.

I'm looking forward to more!

haldoor April 25 2009, 08:52:17 UTC

Deep shit, indeed, as only Sawyer can manage! Jack and Sayid hope they can help him out too, don't worry! We shall see!

Thanks for reading! I hope to have another chapter up in a week or two. Sorry it's slow, but it's better than not happening! ;-)

jaydblu April 27 2009, 13:51:55 UTC

Aw, what's wrong with Sawyer? Jack and Sayid had better work on fixing him immediately. With sex. And cookies. :)

haldoor April 28 2009, 18:24:02 UTC

All will be revealed in due course, as they say! I can't vouch for the cookies ;-P Thanks for reading, my dear! ;-)

haldoor May 9 2009, 04:34:09 UTC

[Just to keep things together, this comment posted by obreesprit at the link in lost_slash]

Poor Sawyer! It looks like Jack and Sayid have their work cut out for them. I'm excited for the next part! Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

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