What if... - Chapter eleven

[haesik]

Title: What if...
Chapter: Eleven
Author: Shiro
Rating: PG
Length: 3800 words
Pairing/Focus: Jongyu
Warnings: Jonghyun's dirty, dirty mouth *washes with soap*
A/N: Finally, here's chapter eleven (which was supposed to be the last one) to this series. It'll probably end in two chapters at most.
Anyways, I said I'd update this week, and I did. There's only

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[haesik]

Spot for junjunki

[haesik]

Lulz, I converted you XD
I'll personally like either of them~ (OT3 FTW!!! >3<)

Next chapter should be up sometime next week~~ ♥

<3

[haesik]

Spot for 7nyy

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[7nyy]

What a way!

This chapter is my favorite, with all and angst... really this take my heart.
The finally part, the way you write each word.
Really love it.

The part where Jong is jealous of chicken AHAHAHAHA *dies*

I can't wait for the next

thanks for this my dear Shiro <3

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[haesik]

Awww, thanks youuu!! ^///^
I think that last part could've been like a bazillion times better, but I'm really, really happy that you liked it <3

Jjong is silly like that XD

I'll try to update sometime this week~ ♥

I keep my promises?

[haesik]

Spot for playingods

YES. AND I LOVE YOU.

[playingods]

THIS IS JUST LIKE MY FAVE CHAPTER EVER. Well I love every chapters but if this one is definitely my fave. So...painfully beautiful ide sobs sobs sobs ;~;

Jongyu sweet scene at the beginning made my grinned like an idiot the squealed when they kissed.

THEN.

Jongyu fought and Jonghyun freaking hit Jinki, his all so perfect cute adorable lovely boyfriend, and Jinki's bleeding OHMYGOD THAT'S JUST TOO MUCH FOR MY LITTLE POOR HEART TO TAKE. BUT I LOVE IT. SO MUCH ♥ ;________;

I hope Jongyu relationship's getting better in the next update and please, please don't take too long because. just because. ;-;

thanks for sharing this. sobs. ♥

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[haesik]

I actually didn't quite like how the fight turned out D:
I wanted it to be so full of emotion, and I think it was quite lacking ;-;

Jongyu will get back together, don't worry! I'm not entirely sure if it'll be next chapter though? There might be a chapter thirteen, depending on how things play out when I write XD

Aww, thanks for your comment ♥. I laughed at it :)I'll update next week, maybe sometime this week. Distractign puppies are distracting o.O

[planfacy]

I just read this series in one go and I'm totally hooked *o*
This chapter is very good. Though still poor Jinki getting hit by Jjong, his goddamn boyfriend for god's sake.

I hope you'll update soon! ♥

[haesik]

Thank you~
Someone should punch Jjong back for Jinki, shouldn't they XD (Key would be glad to smack him down with a pan~)

[reinyuu]

I'm sorry if this is OOT.
But i'm waiting you too for update your fict ;__;
it's been a year now
(2010 to 2011 xD)
Hoho

and for this fict.
Oh mai~~
i've never expected that jjong could hit jinki,since he was the one who really care of jinki.
JJONG You jerk..
Why you didn't let jinki for explaining first.
Update soo i love this story too
<3

[haesik]

Yeah, Jjong acted like a total jerk, didn't he. Key shall bitch-slap him in return >D *cough*

Anyways, thanks for taking the time to read and comment~

[nadyuchun]

Hey there~ i stumbled upon your fic the other day and enjoyed reading it.. and the date says that its been a long time since u update.. i'm dying to know what happen to dearest jongyu.. please update soon~