What if... - Chapter eight

[haesik]

Title: What if...
Chapter: Eight
Author: Shiro
Rating: PG
Length: 4400 words
Pairing/Focus: Jongyu
Warnings: Jonghyun having a dirty mouth? (crazy POV switching?)

Comments

[kaybee38]

This fic is so GOOD!

[haesik]

Thanks!

<3

[haesik]

SPOT for crazyoverbishie

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[haesik]

I have to stop posting right before leaving places D:

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[crazyoverbishie]

im going to quote one of my fave scene

“Well, there’s an empty seat-”

“Mr. Kwon! There’s an empty seat here!!”
...

“Isn’t that Mr. Park’s seat?”

“But he isn’t here! Besides, he always said he didn’t like this seat!”

“Jonghyun, listen, you can’t just-”

“Aw, come on!! It’s a win win situation!! This school is supposed to be a democracy! The ones involved have a right to vote!!! I-”

“Mr. Kim, extra homework.”

“Whaaat? No way!!”

“Mr. Lee, please go sit beside him so he’ll shut up for a while.”

XXDDD..Jonghyun is such a dork..XXDD

No one noticed the deep look of hurt that flashed through almond irises.
Ok...something is up..>.<

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i see that you spoil your reader too much...>.<...well im happy for that...but you spoil us toooo much..not that i mind though...^^

soo..because im curious what about to happen im going  to the next chapter now^^

see you there^^

p.s. surry i take too long to comment...>.<
btw ... I have to stop posting right before leaving places D:-  --> why is that???

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[crazyoverbishie]

ok..so i forgot to 'italics' my quote...OTL...>.

[7nyy]

Jong is so lovely *-*
Jong know about his feelings
Onew is starting to know
and Key?
key ...love... Jong?

thanks~~

[haesik]

Lol, dubu is too dense for his own good, isn't he?

Key's feelings will be recealed in the next chapter~

Thank YOU for reading!!

[7nyy]

Onew still has many things in his head, so... u know better about this haha

I love your story ;)

[haesik]

I do know, since I'm already halfway through chapter nine~ (might even double post today if you're lucky ;D)

Thank youuuuuuu~ <3

[huishan12]

yay~! totally wonderful update (:

<3

[haesik]

Glad you liked this chapter!!! :D

[7nyy]

XD

ok, I'm stay in the same place.
when I write... i hate edit XDD
sometimes I do it, but I think is more tired that write XD

;)~~

[haesik]

Lol, I like reading my chapters though~
'Cause I'm like, wow, did I just write all of this Jongyu (fail) goodness?? XD

Anyways, posted it already~
Go check it out!!

<333