Moments

Oct 20, 2011 16:01


Title: Moments
Author: habitualunacy
Pairing: Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Angst
Summary: There's a given moment for everything; to not love, to not hate, to not miss. But Wooyoung will always love friday nights, Khun will always hate lines and all of them will always miss Jaebum.
A/N: Wooyoung's POV and Khun's POV thoughts, "speech", ( Read more... )

2pm, habitualunacy, fanfic, jaebum, 2011, wooyoung, nichkhun, khunyoung

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mychocotango October 20 2011, 09:30:32 UTC
Khun may have crossed over their cultural boundaries but he may never be able to cross the line between him and Wooyoung’s heart, however tempting it was=» I was like cheering Khun to cross it right away!! And he did at the end... Ahh, I'm soo happy..lol.
This was really sweet and beautiful.. The way you portray their feelings was just wonderful. Thank you for sharing this .:)

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habitualunacy October 21 2011, 12:30:57 UTC
Thanks for liking it. :) I was wondering whether I should actually make khun cross the line or just leave him in doubt. haha. But I couldn't help it. Their interactions have been on hiatus far too long for my liking so it just have to end with a khunyoung kiss. :p How I wish he would cross the line in real life. hehehe.

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dreamoscope October 20 2011, 10:07:44 UTC
this story catches me right on that summary line on the top. and what a well written story, really. i always love how your story is mostly laced with angst, but in the end the simple happy ending feels so fulfilling cos they went through so much angst in the beginning.

“…because we’re a dance group Wooyoungie, where else should we be?”

.. because he is a dancer, what else should he do?

JUST BREAK MY HEART WHY DONT YOU ;__; but oh gah the concept ties everything so beautifully. that concept of khun crossing the line is so lovely too :D so lovely that i wish it was a little bit longer, because there so much conflict in trying to cross the line, but the fact that he does it just out of impulse and then it turns out really beautiful ;__;

and Jay.. jay… he will always be missed and everytime i come across him in fics theres always this twist in my stomach cos ugh i still wish he never left. /bawls

bb please never stop writing ♥

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habitualunacy October 21 2011, 12:41:38 UTC
Just when I thought that my summary on this was not catchy enough, reading the first line of your comment made me smile. :D Sorry for breaking your heart though. :p I also wanted to stretch Khun's angst and portray the crossing over conflict in Wooyoung's POV to make it longer but I didn't want it to be draggy, if you noticed, most of my fics are quite short. But I am thinking of writing something that is connected with the story line of this fic. and it'll probably include Jaebum since I failed to expand on that part of the story here. Anyway, thank you!!! :D Keep writing as well, I like the way you write khunyoung fics.

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cipherstar October 20 2011, 10:10:10 UTC
Khun may have crossed over their cultural boundaries but he may never be able to cross the line between him and Wooyoung’s heart, however tempting it was.
what?? Buck??? just cross every line you see!!! cross cross cross!!!!!

Every move was crisp, as if Wooyoung had practiced and perfected it long before, and yet he can feel the unwanted melancholy in every step.
“That’s enough. You’ve done enough Wooyoung-ah.”
ngl..tears in my eyes >.<

When he got back Wooyoung was sitting on the floor, his back resting on the mirrors with his knees bended to his chest, arms wrapped around them.
i could just cry if i ever see Woo in this state..seriously..huhu

Khun crossed over.
It was sweet, light and child-like.
Just like Wooyoung.
awww....love this part!!!! sooo khunyoung..simple and romantic..lol

thank you for this!!! ^_____________^

p/s: i don't know what to say, so i just quoted some parts that i love..sorry >.<

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habitualunacy October 21 2011, 12:42:40 UTC
Glad you liked those lines. :D thank you!

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reitachii October 20 2011, 12:04:38 UTC
Omo...it's awesome!
Somehow it feel sadd and sweet at the same time...
Thanks for sharing this^^

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habitualunacy October 21 2011, 12:43:36 UTC
Don't be sad. :) khunyoung will always be khunyoung. :D Thanks you!

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complicated0403 October 20 2011, 12:33:24 UTC
beautifully done...
keep writing...

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habitualunacy October 21 2011, 12:43:56 UTC
Thank you!

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