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Fic Commentary: Restraints, Ch. 5

Jan 24, 2012 23:50

Alright, Chapter 5. And the real reason this fic was almost never written. (Kinda forgot about this section when I did decide to write it. Then got here, and tried not to panic.) Thanks again to yaba for the readthrough, and for assuring me that this wasn’t a mess ( Read more... )

fic commentary, jane/lisbon, restraints-verse, mentalist!fic

Comments 8

justlook3 January 25 2012, 05:15:28 UTC

I have nothing exciting to add. Other than you meant dessert not desert, I'm sure. Why I didn't notice that the other times I've read this story, I do not know. LOL.

h_loquacious January 25 2012, 05:52:24 UTC

I have given up on dessert/desert. I always type desert. Always. Go through every story of mine where dessert is mentioned, and if it is spelt correctly, it is because someone in my reviews has pointed it out. Without fail. I know the difference. I do. I just, it never happens. I accept that each and every time I need to type dessert, it will come out desert. Such is my life.

justlook3 January 25 2012, 05:57:39 UTC

LOL. It's okay, we all have our quirks. Like how I massacre commas. Just as long as you don't use "isle" when you mean "aisle." During my vow renewal planning, I literally wanted to jump through my computer and take a blunt instrument to every bride who talked about walking "down the isle". ARGH.
I have strange triggers.

h_loquacious January 25 2012, 06:00:56 UTC

Yeah, that, would probably bother me more. Just because that feels less like a typo type thing and more like a mistake. IDK. I guess, I can see people genuinely thinking that is how that word is spelt.

Thread 6

spyglass_ January 25 2012, 07:11:35 UTC

So, apparently the fact that they slept together was unexpected to people. I don’t find it so, but then, this was always my intention. I don’t know. It was always the point.

... I am not sure I understand people who think this way. Clearly, my mind resides permanently in the gutter. Or something.

Also, heeeee. And Mayan chocolate ice cream sounds delicious.

h_loquacious January 25 2012, 14:50:38 UTC

HEE! I was talking about YOU. You were definitely one of the people for whom the sleeping together was unexpected. I find this hilarious.

Also, Mayan chocolate ice cream is amazing, but stupidly expensive.