Comments | gyzym: White Collar; Fic; Top to Bottom; NC-17

gyzym

White Collar; Fic; Top to Bottom; NC-17

Apr 15, 2010 02:32

So...tired...but...must...post...library...sex....

Title: Top to Bottom
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Neal/Peter (implied Neal/Peter/El)
Spoilers: Nope nope, villain of the week is entirely made up.
Warnings: Defiling of a library?
Wordcount: 2351
Summary: Neal Caffrey doesn't place bets without knowing the odds.
A/N: Apologies in advance if I wake up ( Read more... )

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Comments 42

bientot April 15 2010, 07:50:01 UTC

This is so hotly cute (cutely hot?)! Peter is so toppy, and Neal usually gets off on it, but I love seeing him insist on Peter paying off his debt.

gyzym April 19 2010, 00:27:24 UTC

Eee, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

elainasaunt April 15 2010, 08:31:01 UTC

All right, look here. I have my dignity. I do not squee.

Except, um, reading this story. I might have squeed. All the way through. Rather loudly.

Thank you thank you thank you! It's JUST what I wanted. You can't even imagine how perfectly this matches what I had in mind.

It's hard to pick out a favourite bit, but this comes awfully close:

Peter sucked in a petulant breath but stayed silent, and Neal ran a finger down his chest. "Now," he said, musingly, "the first rule to being on the bottom is that you don't call the shots."

"I always call the shots, Caffrey. Get moving."

Neal sighed, and looked away from Peter to glance at the books lining the nearest shelf.

And then ... East of Eden! You're so wicked. ILU.

Just one nit to pick, which I hope you won't mind - I know you were posting really late. 'Neal shrugged. "We check it out," he said. "Stake out the library, see what happens. If I'm right, I'll try out that cock ring you've been so urgent about." ' Should be 'If you're right', no?

gyzym April 19 2010, 00:28:14 UTC

Eee, thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked this!

Thaaaat's what I get for posting in the middle of the night and then not really getting online for three days. THANK YOU! *Fixes*

zelda_zee April 15 2010, 09:38:56 UTC

So awesome!

gyzym April 19 2010, 00:29:23 UTC

Thanks! :D

deepbluemermaid April 15 2010, 10:17:09 UTC

Guh, this is amazing. As a librarian, I should strongly disapprove of this story. As a fangirl, I love it!

gyzym April 19 2010, 00:30:04 UTC

YOU ARE A LIBRARIAN?

Okay, be honest with me. HOW MANY PEOPLE HAVE YOU CAUGHT DOING IT IN THE LIBRARY? And how severe is the punishment?!

deepbluemermaid April 19 2010, 01:19:04 UTC

Heh, well, I can't say I ever personally caught anyone in any of the libraries where I've worked. Which is actually a surprise, especially in the last place where I was evening supervisor. It was a three storey law library, where the desk was upstairs and nobody really went down to the lowest level. There were many dark corners where you'd be pretty safe from detection, especially late at night!

Anywya, it'd be totally hypocritical of me to mind too much. I must admit that when I was a student library assistant as an undergrad, my boyfriend picked me up from my office one day and we made out in the dark deserted stacks in the basement. That was fun :)

totally off the subject but... amycat1959 April 19 2010, 05:06:46 UTC

DeepBlueMermaid, I love that icon and would like to steal it to use next time I post in SCA_Snark... :-)

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secretsolitaire April 15 2010, 11:58:21 UTC

UNF. So hot, making Peter beg, a;fljasdl;f, but I think my favorite part was the banter at the end. Or maybe Neal picking up East of Eden, LOL!

gyzym April 19 2010, 00:31:01 UTC

Apparently it is my goal this week to make my favorite literary masters revolve in their graves!

In all honesty, EoE is my favorite book ever, so I couldn't resist using it.

Thanks much for the comment! So glad you enjoyed this :DDDD