White Collar; Fic; Top to Bottom; NC-17

[gyzym]

So...tired...but...must...post...library...sex....

Title: Top to Bottom
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Neal/Peter (implied Neal/Peter/El)
Spoilers: Nope nope, villain of the week is entirely made up.
Warnings: Defiling of a library?
Wordcount: 2351
Summary: Neal Caffrey doesn't place bets without knowing the odds.
A/N: Apologies in advance if I wake up

Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

I am so glad you've finished and posted this. I love the idea of Peter as bottom, and you've captured him perfectly. Pushy, aggresive, asserting dominance even when he's really not in the position to do so.

My favorite part:
Peter made a terrible, desperate little noise and Neal wasn't entirely sure he could keep this charade up long enough to make his point--but he was pretty sure. He didn't bet without knowing his odds

[gyzym]

YOU ALWAYS LEAVE COMMENTS SO FULL OF WIN.

Seriously, the biggest smiles after I read them, always. THANK YOU.

[asimaiyat]

Oh my god, sex and books! I'm just going to accept this as a special present for me, if not from you specifically, than from ~the universe~.

The dialogue is amazing. I totally lost it at "you are OCCUPIED with FUCKING ME." :D

[gyzym]

Toooootally a special present for you! I can retroactively claim that, right?!

I'm so glad you liked this :D

[jrosemary]

Loved this! I love Neal turning Peter's habit of following rules against him. I love Neal training Peter to be a bottom. And I love Peter for following said rules and enjoying himself while he's at it (even if he has a hard time admitting it.)

One little typo in this exchange:

Neal shrugged. "We check it out," he said. "Stake out the library, see what happens. If I'm right, I'll try out that cock ring you've been so urgent about."

Peter hissed in a shocked, aroused breath and Neal, who in actual fact had absolutely no compunctions about putting on a cock ring, knew he'd been right to save that incentive for a rainy day.

Peter gave him a contemplative look. "Alright," he said, slowly. "And if you're right?"

Neal smiled, just this side of vicious. "If I'm right," he said, "we fuck in the library, and I get to top."

I think Nea'ls first offer should be, "If you're right, I'll try out that cock ring." Not "If I'm right."

[gyzym]

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

And, lol, yes, that was totally a typo. I shouldn't post fic at 3 AM and then get off the internet for the weekend, alas! Thank you SO much for pointing it out, I would have discovered it myself later and been mortified :D

And now, I think we need...

[amycat1959]

...to see a follow-up where Neal *does* have to wear the cock-ring...

[themostepotente]

Nnnggghhh! That was smoking hot, babe ♥

[gyzym]

Heee, I'm flattered! Thanks so much!

[purple_chalk]

OF COURSE IT IS STEINBECK OF COURSE OF COURSE JFKD;SA

[gyzym]

HEAVEN FORBID I STOP MYSELF FROM ASSERTING MY OWN INSANE LITERARY NEEDS