White Collar; Fic; Resistance and Futility: A Study; Neal/Peter; R

[gyzym]

I told you I'd provide more substantial fare during normal human hours! But before I get into that title/rating/summary business we all know and love, a few things you should know:

1. This story can be read alone, but, if you're interested, it is a sequel to the story this true/false thing, in which it is mentioned that Peter has caught Neal more

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[purple_chalk]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I hadn't seen that last part

[gyzym]

:D

[asimaiyat]

eee! This is so much fun. I love the way you show their relationship developing.

And for the love of God, how do you write so well so fast? Truly envious here.

[gyzym]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it!

And, uh...I don't know *well* I write, but the speed is a two-fold thing. The first part of it is that, with the exception of that little racketeering brainfart, everything I've posted thus far has been part of the same story--the weird little character study that comes before this and the porn that comes after. So it's developed sort of..as one? In my head, and then all I had to do was write it out.

The second part is that when I get enthralled by a concept, I write about it really really fast. I can't write fast enough, usually, to get it all down..the entirety of that porn was actually done in an IM window to a friend, to give you an idea. The downside? When my RL gets busy, I have to vanish for months at a time :( As such, I always try to post as fast as I can write when I'm around.

SORRY ABOUT THIS COMMENT NOVEL. Thanks so much for reading and commenting :D

[elrhiarhodan]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Wow.

I'll give you more intelligent feedback later, after the 6th or 12th or 15th reading.

Oh... wow.

[gyzym]

Heee! Glad you enjoyed it!

[dracofiend]

*applauds* You've done it again you genius you! Wow, what a show. I loved it. I loved seeing how Neal is not, in fact, this ubercriminal type who, like, has superhuman stealth and never makes a mistake. The opening was fabulous--Peter's outrage at how young and un-hardened Neal is. So perfect. So Peter! Someone who has a very clear picture of what is, what isn't, and what ought to be--well, that kind of person WOULD be totally enraged at discovering that the mastermind behind all those crimes is this pretty young thing. But! As much as I gleed at the start and as much as I adored the whole damn story, my FAVORITE part was this:

Instead, like a middle school girl with a fucking crush, he'd said "You know my name." He'd realized his mistake a second too late, but before he could start stammering an excuse, Neal raised both eyebrows and offered him a slow, enthralled smile. He looked like himself for the first time since Peter had arrested him

[gyzym]

SERIOUSLY YOUR COMMENTS ARE ALWAYS SO AWESOME.

That scene was one of my favorites to write :D It's absolutely trying to parallel their relationship in the show...I can think of a few different moments I was sort of pulling on there. And I love that the rest of it right true for you and AHH, thank you!

[dracofiend]

hi hi! I got something for you! *nudges you to icon*

because I love your fic so much and ALSO. "You'd prefer just Captain, then?" Killed me.

oh man. Please never stop writing. :)

AWESOME PRESENT IS SO AWESOME.

[gyzym]

OH MY GOD YOU DIDN'T.

...

OH MY GOD YOU TOTALLY DID.

AHHHHHH NO ONE HAS EVER MADE AN ICON OUT OF SOMETHING I WROTE BEFORE!

I...I am going to go die in the corner now. I have a condition known as acute squee-age, it's VERY SERIOUS.

YOU ARE SO AWESOME. THANK YOU!!!

[speccygeekgrrl]

I love the evolution of their relationship. Captain America, lol.

This whole story set is so epic and wonderful. ♥

[gyzym]

Hee, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed.