FIC: A Kind of Wild Justice

[gypsyflame]

Title: A Kind of Wild Justice
Author: gypsyflame
Pairing: Bill/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3700
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. This was created for fun, not for profit.
Warnings: Dubious consent; D/s; humiliation; a bit of forced feminization
Summary: Draco had known that working for Weasley was a bad idea.
A/N:

Comments

[kitschobrien]

Guh. This was so hot my brain melted. I think I'm going to have to take a trip to Gringotts tomorrow... Draco at least deserves and Employee of the Month award for that performance.

[gypsyflame]

LOL thank you! :-)

[monster_o_love]

Wow!!!! That was ridiculously HOT!! Loved the knickers.. mmmm! :)

[gypsyflame]

Thank you!

[ladysasuke]

god that was so hot i really want this to be a multichapter or atleast a sequel an ark would be good as well.

[gypsyflame]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I don't really have any plans to continue it. I'd like to leave Draco's future up to the reader to imagine. :-)

[icyaurora8]

I don't EVER read Bill/Draco, but I have to say.... that was very hot! This sort-of 'dub-con' makes me hope that there will be a sequel of some sort... office sex just rocks!

[gypsyflame]

Thank you! I'm glad you gave it a chance. I don't have any plans for a sequel, but my personal vision of what happens later is that Harry finds out about the harassment, blows a fuse, and then comforts Draco with hot lovin'. That may or may not work for you, LOL. ;-)

[sepsku]

I'm completely torn about this. Just, gah. I love humiliation and D/s, but this just rubbed me completely the wrong way, there was nothing hot about it and I almost couldn't bring myself to finish it. Poor, poor Draco. Usually I like Bill/Draco but here? I just wanted Draco to scratch his eyes out. *wants to hug him*

On the other hand - congratulations. This brought out very, very intense feelings, and that's something you should be proud of. There's not a single bit of 'meh' in this. So yeah. *applauds you*

Also yes, more would be appreciated. I want to see where this goes. <3

[gypsyflame]

Thank you for giving it a try. I'm sorry it was difficult for you to read, but in a way I'm also glad, because I really did try to make the fic as close to a real-life sexual harassment situation as possible - so of course it comes off as disturbing. There's definitely a big difference between humiliation and D/s in a consensual context vs. a dub-con context, and the latter can definitely take all of the sexiness out of a situation for a lot of people.

And I've never gotten so many requests for a sequel! I really didn't have any plans to continue this, but after seeing how people reacted to it I'm starting to reconsider that. :-)

[sepsku]

Amen to that. That's exactly what made it so hard - when I started reading I wasn't sure whether I was supposed to have the 'fantasy kink scene' or the 'real-life issue' mindset, so when I went into it thinking it was a kink approach, the intensity threw me into a loop. Hearing you took the real-life route has me looking into it from a completely different perspective. And it is an extraordinaly piece, yes. The only thing I could nitpick about is Fleur - I kept wondering where she fit into things and the more I think about it and Bill's character, the more ideas I get.And - big YES to that thing about the difference between a BDSM scene and real life. I love the harshest rape/ravisment scenes, hardcore humiliation, pretty much anything - but the moment there's vagueness about consent I balk. Reading something with a certain mindset and then having the author do a 180 degree turn is like nails on a chalkboard. Not to mention

[lokifan]

I really did try to make the fic as close to a real-life sexual harassment situation as possible - so of course it comes off as disturbing.

You absolutely succeeded. This was hot, but absolutely disturbing - Bill was v realistic, as was Draco's sense of being bullied.