FIC: Let Me Live 2/2

[gypsyflame]

Comments

I like the way you think!

[cynaga]

You are one of the few authors who can show the difference between hot sex and hot sex with someone you're in love with. You do it by fully characterizing the players and using sex with strangers or outside of the relationship. I wouldn't want it in my own relationship like that but it's as hot as hell to read~!

Re: I like the way you think!

[gypsyflame]

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you noticed that distinction. It's one of my biggest literary kinks.

Re: I like the way you think!

[hogwartshoney]

Yep yep yep....... that's sooo right ... about the hot sex/hot sex with.... Sounds trite to say, but love really makes the difference ;)

[lilyginny27]

Gah, I loved the possessiveness in this on so many levels.

*fans self*

[gypsyflame]

Thank you! :-)

[gypsyflame]

Thank you! I'm definitely a big proponent of Snaco, so I can't encourage you enough to seek it out. It really is a beautiful pairing. You can certainly expect to see more of it from me in the future! (Although I have to admit a lot of it will probably be part of a H/S/D threesome, LOL.) I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reading!

[snegurochka_lee]

Just when I thought I'd read all your stuff, I find this one via crack-broom! Love how you deal with Draco's needs here, and the complex emotions of him justifying the other men while still loving Snape. Harry was so goddamn scary and sexy, too. ;lakjsdf;lskfj. And the idea of Snape making Draco replay the Harry scene -- such a great writing choice! I loved how the details in the first scene come across so very differently in the second, and how Snape and Draco's relationship and love shines through it. Eeee! And as an aside, the vitriol of Snape's hatred of Harry... I totally adored that for some reason. :D

[gypsyflame]

Blast from the past! Thank you. I wrote this back when I was just starting to get into D/s fic and struggling with how to portray it as a loving, mutually satisfying dynamic. So it was almost like a writing exercise for me - taking essentially the same scene and writing it in two drastically different ways, to demonstrate not just for the reader but for myself how the exact same actions can come across as loving or borderline abusive depending on how you approach them.

This might also have been the first time I wrote kind-of-a-douche!Harry, LOL.

Anyway, thanks for the walk down memory lane! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. ♥

[hogwartshoney]

Harry was fuckin' awesome!!!!! I love their dynamic together, and yes, maybe Harry got a bit too possessive or whatever, but damn, that was still hawwwwt. Rawwwrrrrr

and then.. Severus' note! Just two flippin' words... but still..... IMPACT !!! I felt that one in my gut, and then his utter rage... and the way he'd resigned himself to Draco cheating, and how wrong he was about the 'why'..... and then THEIR version of the smexin' was soo much more smexy!

Lord, I need to lie down...

[gypsyflame]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)