Deep

[gyorgeous]

Title: Deep
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Length: One-shot
Genre: Slice of life, Romance, Angst
Rating: G
Summary: Some find strength in walking away, but some are buried just too deep to breakaway.

Comments

[curiousocurious]

Idiot Yunho. If he is unhappy with her he should just break up already. whether he might or might not get back with Jae. he is not doing any good for himself, Jae or the girl.

[gyorgeous]

Actually, Yunho and the girl already broke up, reason why Jaejoong is already back at Yunho's flat. I forgot to put anything /at all/ that clearly states Yunho's not with the girl anymore. I'm sorry I wasn't able to clear that up. I got too carried away in writing more of the struggles Yunho and Jaejoong are currently going through because of the changes their break-up and getting-back-together brought them I didn't notice the story didn't seem as how it is in my head anymore. :(

Thanks to your comment I will be able to add up a few /and change some/ parts to clarify that. And thank you very much for taking time to read this. :)

[heesmirk]

I really like suffering!jae lol i think this is more angsty than i thought it'll be :/ and thousand years as a background song didn't really helped at all. Anyway, thank you for sharing this ! I hope this will be a twoshot or something since i'm pretty much curious on how Yunho will eventuallygo back to jae or will he not :|

[gyorgeous]

Thank you very much for reading this. I like suffering!jae too, though I still and will always prefer happy endings than sad ones.

I added/changed a few parts to clarify some points because I was drunk-writing and didn't notice that it wasn't clear as to whether Yunho broke up with the girl or if he came back to Jaejoong. I'm really sorry for not being able to clear that up. Again, thank you. Your comment helped me notice what the fic was lacking.

[torakiss]

i'll read this in the morning~ gonna save a spot here for me to fill in later. i love you! ♥

[torakiss]

ah sorry this took me a while to read!!
and what do you mean this isn't good. this is awesome bb!
technically, i like your metaphors. your words. your sentences.
i like how jaejoong, despite his insecurities, is still willing to accept yunho despite his fault TuT

i feel good reading yunjae again, thank you so much for writing this *w*

[gyorgeous]

Thank you bb <3 T^T I know how high your standards are that's why I was (in a way) sure this won't be worth reading...considering how ridiculously good the other fics you read are. But knowing that you liked my words, I feel happy. This comment means a lot to me. Thank you so much for reading this. I love you. ♥ T^T

[tanya_h24]

honestly, i don't like broken yunjae, though they actually got back together. but i like angsty jae here and yunho being the one in guilty so deep xD (i don't hate yunho, no)

thanks for sharing! :D

[gyorgeous]

I don't like broken YunJae too. I'm always for happy endings <3 But I guess obstacles are inevitable and every once in a while, they will be too much to handle. ^^

Thank you very much for reading! :)