The Lies We Tell (10/?)

Sep 16, 2010 15:36


Title: The Lies We Tell (10/?)
Pairing: gen, Gill, Cal
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: LtM not mine; Henri & Le Fort, mine.
Summary: When Zoe brings a new case and a new partner to the Lightman Group, long-buried truths will be revealed as they work to defend an innocent man, while a side investigation may place one partner in mortal peril.
A/N: No beta ( Read more... )

the lies we tell, lie to me, cal/gill

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:50:07 UTC
Alrighty, then you shall! Thanks for commenting:)

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midnightblue17 September 17 2010, 17:31:18 UTC
losing your steam??? noooo! heaven forbid! i think that you've been doing a great job in up-ing the ante towards the great reveal where everything will make sense, and cal/gilian will live crazily ever after together (hee.)

i liked that torres had some growth and direction in her character. i think i'm quite frustrated with the way the show is handling the characters because it seems like it became the "cal show" and everyone (especially gilian, torres and loker) became extras. not good. >:(

gil and henri. i'm really interested where that is going. i mean i'm sure the gil of before is different from the gil today.. but who knows? some things might resurface given the right circumstances. :) can't wait.

maybe to regain some steam... you should create something steamy..hahahaha maybe gil should start having dreams with cal in it (or a threesome with henri and cal--a fulfillment of her fantasy! --k must shut up now before i get too carried away.)

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:52:10 UTC
I'm going to keep going. Thank you! I love your icon BTW.

Torres and Loker both suffer from a lack of development. ROUGH. So I'm gonna see what I can do to fix that :) Well everyone other than Cal suffers. Still...

G/H - Just wait. JUuuuuusssssst wait.

Ha. nice tips. Thanks for commenting!

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midnightblue17 September 20 2010, 00:43:52 UTC
thanks! no one can be un-cheered by a calvin and hobbes snowman doomsday icon. :)

i suppose another purpose of fanfiction is to fill in those gaps and lack of character development issues. so yey for that. :D

G/H - i'm waiting and holding on tight to my bloody seat just in case you send us in a 180. ;)

the are very helpful tips, arent they? =))

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forlond September 17 2010, 21:09:00 UTC
More than 5! Not commenting on every chapter but I really enjoy reading this story.

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:52:40 UTC
Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for commenting this time!

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dreamsofkate September 18 2010, 05:20:25 UTC
loving this story. I always think that they don't give Gillian enough depth and you capture her beautifully. Have enjoyed every word of this, all I can say is PLEASE DON"T STOP!

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:53:14 UTC
Thanks a lot! I'm going to keep going. Push on through. Thanks for commenting!

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dark_cygnet September 18 2010, 17:44:53 UTC
Man, this has to be my favorite LTM fic ever. From the characterizations to the storyline to just damn good writing, I've really enjoyed this so far, it's meeting every expection of quality I look for in fic. With that being said, I understand about losing steam on a project, it happens to me alot. I will confess I will be disappointed not to see the ending if you choose not to finish it but you have to do whats best for you and thats cool by me. We got nine great chapters. take care!

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:54:19 UTC
WOW. That's a big wow from me. There are some good ones out there, you know. I'll keep on going. Thanks for the blush worthy compliments. AND Thanks for commenting!

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