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Mamihlapinatapai 4/6

Aug 29, 2010 00:05

Title: Mamihlapinatapai 4/6
Pairing: Cal/Gillian
Disclaimer: LtM not mine
Summary: A look shared by two people with each wishing that the other will initiate something that they both desire but which neither one wants to start. For Pineapple.
A/N: Thanks to everyone who's enjoying this. This part isn't so UST saturated ;)
( Potential for more )

Comments 8

angel_2606 August 29 2010, 04:28:50 UTC

Please forgive the vulgarity, but methinks Cal isn't PG in his head.

No forgiveness necessary. I think that it was completely in character for him to think that, especially if that's what he's getting from the look that she's giving him.

*blinks* oops, what a weird way to start a comment, considering that it's the first time that I'm commenting on this fic of yours. I have to say, I've seen the posts for this fic for the past week, and it wasn't till now that I sat down and read all the chapters. I was pleasantly surprised when I found this fic to be well-written, in character, and containing copious amounts of UST, the latter of which I'd very much like to see MORE of. *grins* Keep writing and I can't wait to read the rest of it!

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 22:56:00 UTC

Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. I tend to like my fics well-written, in character and UST-y too. So you're in the right spot :)

crumpled_up August 29 2010, 04:39:50 UTC

Hee. Cal and PG? What. Never. ;)

Maybe because you stay away from all names starting with 'C', 'A', and 'D'.

This line made me LOL. Seriously. Because she would so think that and then come up blank. Still loving this.

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 23:12:14 UTC

Didja notice that C A D spell CAD? Yeah. I went there :) She is such a little thinker, that she would do that to herself. Oh Foster. THANKS FOR COMMENTING!!!

baby8love August 29 2010, 13:52:13 UTC

this line: "It's in quiet understanding that there will always be the potential for more." is so beautiful. i see #5 out so more comments there! :)

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 23:13:40 UTC

AW thanks. Glad you liked it! I love that line tooooo. Thanks for commenting!

aleia_jade August 30 2010, 16:59:07 UTC

I've resolved my issues on how I want this show to play out. This chapter, right here. Show people, pay attention and get Gwassh0ppa on your crew to write this into cannon. And then they get married and and live happily ever after at the helm of the Lightman group, and nothing really changes in their awesome banter-y interaction except for a lot less boyfriends/blondes/sleeping around and a lot more smiling.

Basically, I am in love with this chapter.

gwassh0ppa August 30 2010, 23:04:41 UTC

I am so pleased, that YOU are in love with this chapter. Funny thing is, this was originally going to be a LONG 5things fic, but then I considered how it would play out in parts. I like it this way better too.

ANYWAY... I think this one is my fave of all of them. Possibly. Ha. If the show picked me up, I think I'd be okay with that :) Except they won't. Still. Thanks for the kind words :) AND GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT.