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Darkfic Gift: Untitled (for motley_sis)

Apr 25, 2009 02:11

Title: Gift Three
Written by: ederyn for motley_sis
Rating: R
Warnings: death, imagery of plague and illness
Gift #3: Duo/Trowa break-up; either discontinuation of friendship or of something a little more saucy. Post-war. Make it hurt!

( Not surprising that night always seemed to descend quickly in the L2 sector; apparently God didn't want to look at it anymore. )

duo, author: ederyn, trowa, gore, darkficexchange, violence, angst, death, fiction

Comments 12

nagi_schwarz April 25 2009, 21:01:00 UTC

What a way to go, and what a way to kill someone. I can't really fault Duo for not wanting to die alone, but Trowa really got the short end of the stick. Makes me wonder why they ended.

nagi_schwarz April 26 2009, 02:57:56 UTC

Yes, I've always suspected that Duo was purely evil underneath. It's the ones who hide in clergy gear that you have to watch out for. Thanks for reading and commenting!

basilton April 26 2009, 03:47:02 UTC

*slaps and slaps Duo* Waaah, he's so evil and yet pathetic. Poor Doodles!

basilton April 26 2009, 20:16:06 UTC

That he is. *slaps him too* Thank you for reading and commenting!

motley_sis April 27 2009, 11:57:48 UTC

Thank you so much for this wonderful gift! \(^-^)/First off, let it be said: I am a sucker for fics that show the writer has done some research. Much appreciate the reference to Dickens - those pieces of narration about the bubonic plague thicken the atmosphere and heighten the sense of foreboding. The setting is perfect ( ... )

gwdarkfics April 27 2009, 15:19:39 UTC

Awwwww! Thankies so muchly, dude! I was truly worried that this wouldn't measure up compared to how awesome your own writing is, and since I knew you would know who wrote any fic for you I was worried too that even if you hated it you might feel obligated to fawn all over it out of a sense of friendship and not wanting to hurt my feelings. But that comment sounds totally sincere to me, so you've made my day! I'm so happy you liked it, and that I could make you miserable once again. *pets and pets* It was an awesome prompt! I may write another fic with it, using a different pairing. Have fun at the show tonight!

motley_sis April 27 2009, 23:05:44 UTC

By now you should know I would not lie about what I think of your writing, silly! Honestly, if we're talking about writing standards - you are mine. When I don't really like a fic or dislike parts of it, I will never say I love it or fawn over it just because we are friends. There are plenty of other nice things to say in such cases. ε[♥](^-^) Feel free to ask me for brutal opinions at any time, though, if that's what you're looking for. Not that I know how to properly critique fiction, or anything... and by all means, I consider myself but a newb.

Anywho, glad to have made your day! You made mine as well, so it's only fair, right? Heh! *hugs and clings*

The concert was fabelhaft! I even got to misbehave a little - just a pity there was little room to dance like an eediot, since it turned out to be at the Utrecht theatre... ah well!

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anonymous May 7 2009, 05:36:40 UTC

Thanks! She said to make it hurt, so I did my best. Probably a dangerous thing for her to say to anyone in this comm. Heh.

masa_reforged May 18 2009, 17:02:58 UTC

man, i'm not so into "vengeful ex" stories, but i really did enjoy this. something about how elaborate and awful Duo's trap was just made it excellent for me. been a while since i've been through my Dickens, but the quotes did fit, and the descriptions of the pestilence filled city were great.

Duo was so awful. just, really... the themes were good, but no sympathy from me, buster!

masa_reforged May 23 2009, 07:37:27 UTC

Isn't he heevil? Waaaaaah! Duo rarely gets to be wicked in fanfiction these days, though, that I couldn't resist. Hee! So glad you liked it!