Comments | gunwars: → love is a doing word (2/2)

traincar in gunwars

→ love is a doing word (2/2)

Apr 18, 2011 23:10

Comments 55

epistolic April 20 2011, 06:45:27 UTC

CAS I HAVE NOT YET HAD THE TIME TO READ THIS BUT REST ASSURED I WILL READ IT THE MOMENT I GET HOME \o/

traincar April 21 2011, 02:37:13 UTC

Oh, don't worry your pretty little head off. It'll be here. :D But just so you know, your happy flailing makes me so happy flaily, too. ♥

epistolic April 28 2011, 00:56:22 UTC

Oh, honey. I finished this yesterday and - I just - I've said it before twenty thousand times, but I'll say it again: I love the way you write. I love your word choices, the way you order your sentences, the way every single scene is such a small snippet but has such an overarching feel of... purpose. Every word is necessary, every emotion, every stark simile. Darling, you are such a master! There is still so much I have to learn from you. ♥

traincar April 28 2011, 04:31:38 UTC

Mel, Mel, Mel. I don't think you'll ever understand how flattering it is to hear you say such nice things about my writing. Honestly, I get this bone-deep sense of pride when you tell me you've enjoyed reading. It's... crazy. It's really crazy. I think you and I have a really fulfilling sense of mutual respect. It's wonderful. ♥ One day, we should work on something together.

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ampliflyer April 20 2011, 07:49:45 UTC

OH GOD I AM SO HAPPY YOU GAVE THEM A "HAPPY" ENDING because from all your notes i got the idea you wanted to destroy them! I also love your take on Dom's fate -- this is how I feel. The damn top kept spinning. It's just somehow saddening how I haven't seen many fics exploring the other option -- the one where it is all a dream for Dom (the ending I mean).

You know how much I love this story and it was such an ~honor to be part of the progress, honestly. I love the elephants and the two-halves-of-a-whole and oh god, this, because a young heir has a pinwheel in his hand and all of them wait on the shore of Dom’s life. *flails*

And no matter what you think, darling, you did justice for Gaby's amazing vid. Because this is an incredible story. You're incredible. ♥

traincar April 20 2011, 14:05:19 UTC

FRIDA YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO HAPPY.

I always thought the top would keep spinning. I wanted to do what I could to show that without getting into the technicalities of it. And I'm glad you liked that line!

Thank you thank you thank you for being there when I needed you and kicking my ass when I didn't think I could finish. Superhero, remember? ♥

happymaybe April 20 2011, 09:54:17 UTC

fuck, this was beautiful and painful and wonderful. thank you for sharing. ♥

traincar April 20 2011, 14:02:58 UTC

Thank you for reading! ♥ I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

outdreamt April 20 2011, 10:14:34 UTC

This is painful and wonderfully done, the way it melds into the canon storyline is breathtaking and wow *FLAIL*

sjdkajskdjaskdas; *flail*

traincar April 20 2011, 14:02:30 UTC

Thank you so, so much. I'm so happy you liked it!

haltlos April 20 2011, 21:16:58 UTC

Wow what an intelligent and creative way to twist the plot and turn their worlds upside down!

traincar April 21 2011, 02:32:30 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! That's very kind of you! Glad you enjoyed it!