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((OOC)) Critique post
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[[006]]
[The writing is very quick, fluid, and almost abrupt in starting, following a singular train of thought.]In retrospect, sharing another person's body and mind can be more enlightening than I may have wanted it to be-- the man was obviously a sociopath, and that's a state of mind that I don't want to feel again. But that begs the question: is being ( Read more... ) -
[[005]]
I can't help but think that even across different universes and times, humans will be humans and loss will be loss.
[The pen rests on a new line, but hesitates. It starts again after a notable pause.]
For those who want to learn, I can probably teach you how to use a gun. -
[[003]]
[The handwriting is legible and recognizable, but a little less controlled.]
This place is extremely temperamental. The Wilderness, the elevator, the animals, the... building materials; it's a nice and constant change of pace, I'll admit.
That place on the fourth floor though? I think that remains my favorite.
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[[002]]
So having found a job and more stable housing... I think it's about time to explore a little.
Sniper: I've been told I can purchase a gun from you?
((OOC: aoiwjfjskldfj A MILLION THANK YOUS TO THE ANON WHO GOT ME A PAID ACCOUNT ♥ ♥ ♥ ;;;; There would be so many sparkles here right now if this weren't an RP journal. +HUGS FOREVER+)) -
[[001]]
[His writing is surprisingly neat and legible; very military, but written quickly and smoothly, a few letters connected as if he has a background with cursive.]
So anyone can see what I'm writing here? How novel. Hello to you. Yes, you. Whoever you are.
Now excuse me as I figure out how to go back to... wherever I’m from.
