Fic: Finding Hope (Plaude)

Feb 22, 2009 19:42

Title: Finding Hope
Rating: PG
Pairing: Peter/Claude
Note: Extremely belated response to englishmuffin2's prompt on the "Distractions" fic thread: What's Claude thinking between Peter landing on that taxi and his actually getting downstairs to see that Peter's okay?
Summary: I killed him. He asked for my help, pleading, begging and I killed him.Disclaimer: I own ( Read more... )

heroes, plaude, epic, fic

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guanin February 22 2009, 19:51:52 UTC
Thank you! writing Claude is fun, even when he makes me sad.

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g0shawk February 22 2009, 23:37:57 UTC
OMG. You are amazing!! His voice is perfect! How do you do that?? Wow. *claps*

Typo: I find Peer in the alley -->Peter

I especially loved these lines:

-Okay, fine, so I threw him out there a bit unannounced, off you go, send me a postcard, but that’s how it works.
-Oh, by the way, I can heal from anything. Never mind mentioning this trivial, little detail.
-Couldn’t hurt a fly without his conscience curling up and crying.

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guanin February 22 2009, 23:48:14 UTC
Thank you so much!First person pov is kinda my thing. My creative writing professor said so oh so long ago.

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gingerberrysnap February 23 2009, 01:42:42 UTC
Ooo, yay. I was pleasantly surprised to see this!

I love your Claude voice. It always has a good cadence to it, and I can totally see that being his thought process after Peter hits the taxi. Great job!

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guanin February 23 2009, 03:04:46 UTC
I was browsing through the fic threads looking for ideas and this one intrigued me.

Thank you! I love writing Claude's pov, so double yay!

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entropy_maximum February 23 2009, 02:35:37 UTC
I love it, perfect, absolutely magnificent. Your Claude is so spot on I'd believe this as canon, what was going on in his head in this scene, it's so believable!

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guanin February 23 2009, 03:05:40 UTC
Thank you! Such a lovely comment.

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ibonekoen February 23 2009, 04:16:28 UTC
*hugs Claude tightly* Aw, see, we knew you cared! XD

You've got an amazing Claude voice. :D Well written.

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guanin February 23 2009, 13:54:21 UTC
Oh, Claude. He's just so stubborn about admitting his feelings.

Thank you so much!

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