Fic: Finding Hope (Plaude)

Feb 22, 2009 19:42

Title: Finding Hope
Rating: PG
Pairing: Peter/Claude
Note: Extremely belated response to englishmuffin2's prompt on the "Distractions" fic thread: What's Claude thinking between Peter landing on that taxi and his actually getting downstairs to see that Peter's okay?
Summary: I killed him. He asked for my help, pleading, begging and I killed him.Disclaimer: I own ( Read more... )

heroes, plaude, epic, fic

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teastainedbird February 23 2009, 04:19:51 UTC
I loved it!
Very good characterization.

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guanin February 23 2009, 13:54:53 UTC
Thank you!

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jaune_chat February 23 2009, 13:56:25 UTC
This is really great. I just love both the stream-of-consciousness approach and all the second guessing, bargaining, anger, relief... it's like the five stages of denial of roof-tossing! This is just really well done, skillfully written, with great characterization. Thanks so much for writing!

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guanin February 23 2009, 14:47:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I debated for a bit whether to make it resent or past tense, but the former made a better fit.

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lotus0kid February 25 2009, 16:11:57 UTC
I was so hoping someone would tackle this prompt! And this is great, love how his thought-process kind of spirals down into self-hatred until he knows Peter is okay. Aww, poor Claude. But then that makes the fact that Peter is okay even more powerful, which is awesome.

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guanin February 25 2009, 16:34:15 UTC
Thank you! I've noticed that my Claude at least has serious self-worth issues in general. Well, when your best friend doesn't think twice about killing you on company orders it doesn't do wonders for your self-esteem. The poor guy needs some Peter love.

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