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guanin

Fic: Crimson Sunset (Part 2)

Jan 04, 2008 11:56

Title: Crimson Sunset (Part 2)
Pairing: Adam/Hiro, Adam/Ando, Hiro/Ando
Rating: NC-17
Series order: Screaming into the Wind,
Discovery,
Meeting.
First part is here
Summary: Adam ponders the nature of memory.
AN: Daniel is Linderman’s first name.
Disclaimer: I own noting but my own words.

( Memory is a construct of ideas trapped inside your head that shifts and transforms itself with no notion of space or time )

ando/adam, heroes, hando, fic, kiro

Comments 19

eva_rosen January 4 2008, 16:28:27 UTC

Boy, Hiro really is going to kill him now.

guanin January 5 2008, 00:27:59 UTC

*shifty eyes* I can't really say anything about what will happen. I'm still writing it, actually.

Thank you for the comment!

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guanin January 5 2008, 00:33:16 UTC

Thank you! You quoted one of my favorite lines!

I feel quite bad for him myself. He's so tragic in a fucked up way.

shaka_chan January 4 2008, 19:05:52 UTC

Oh my. It's going to be quite interesting when Hiro returns...

But you are so brilliant. >.< This fic is soooo amazing.

guanin January 5 2008, 00:37:44 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very flattered by everyone's response to this fic.

tju_tju_tju_tju January 4 2008, 23:51:57 UTC

hcfiwoehdfoqef!!!!! I love this fic, and I love YOU. Dude, this is just so awesome. You really do have Adam's character down so well; you're able to capture his hate and his love at the same time. The Ando thing is just pure genius. AND THE FIRST PART IS TOO.

Hiroshima. I didn't even get to write the entire word. Seeing the first four letters gleaming up at me from the lined paper was all it took to activate my healing and bring all the memories rushing back like water suddenly bursting from an exploded dam.

That is so totally how he knew this. This is my canon now. *runs around like an idiot*

guanin January 5 2008, 00:59:23 UTC

I am grinning so much right now. Your comments always leave me bouncing in my chair.

I do find Adam rather easy to write. I just grasp him very quickly. Not that this fic is easy; it drives me crazy half the time, so I'm happy that it's working out like I hoped.

Honestly, I couldn't think of how else he could have heard Hiro's name. And since "Hiro" is derived from Hiroshima, it made sense.

tju_tju_tju_tju January 5 2008, 01:05:25 UTC

Haha, awesome. XD

I actually meant just that whole thing with remembering Hiro, that that was what jogged his memory and how he knows that that is how he can get his memory back. That was genius, really. And it's so canon.

guanin January 5 2008, 01:16:41 UTC

It just struck me in the show how he knew exactly how Peter could get his memory back. I figured he'd know that he can heal from brain damage, but the exact method? That's got to be personal experience. And of course, in my universe, who's more important to him than Hiro?

likeahobbit January 5 2008, 00:33:03 UTC

::flails like an idiot::

Is it wrong of me to stubbornly hope that Adam will lose his nerve or obsessive need for vengence and...well, just leave Ando the hell alone?

Your prose is astounding. Your characterization is fabulous and I actually squeed when you mentioned little Elle. I have no idea why; the awesomeness of the fic just made me giddy I suppose.

Okay. So yes.

::loves::

guanin January 5 2008, 01:12:11 UTC

*grinning again* Thank you so very much!

I really can't tell you how that will end up. I kinda want to, but I can't. I know how you feel, though. Ando is just...Ando. Coming up with the ending was difficult, partly because of that.