Weekend WIP, 'Sam Vimes' school of policing,' meme

[gryphonrhi]

You know:  process, watch, and, as needed, prod buttocks.  (There will be no going Librarian-poo, however.) /Discworld jokes

Gacked from

Comments

[gryphonrhi]

Start: 3 pages, 1,197 words.
Stop: 4 pages, 1,500 words even.

Snippet: Duke turned when the door to the Grey Gull chimed; he'd meant to lock that, damn it. His eyes narrowed when he didn't recognize his visitor, either.

"The sign said waffles?" The tall, slim black man raised a questioning eyebrow and hand simultaneously.

[keerawa]

Joe Dawson, B.A.M.F.

Hell yeah!

[gryphonrhi]

Start: 4 pages, 1,844 words
Stop: 4 pages, 2,0004 words (might as well stop, I get to come back to this further down the list...)

Snippet (opening paragraph in this case): You can learn a lot of things in 13 weeks of boot, 3 months in Vietnam, and 40 years of Watching immortals. One of the truer ones is that almost no one looks up.

[keerawa]

God, that's fantastic! I look forward to reading the finished product!

[gryphonrhi]

Thanks! ::laughing:: 700 words so far tonight and oh my gods, it's getting out of hand! ::glee: Maybe I'll be able to yell for a beta by the weekend!